@virusthekid
Hi, my name Enoch Agyiri. I'm the writer of 'A Legion of Horizons'.
I understand that you have read the first two parts of my story and I need your feedback.
•Where you able to relate to the characters' dialogue style?
•Did some of the sentences throw you off?
•Did you feel the characters were flat and robotic?
•Was it difficult picturing some of the scenes you read?
ei ciao per caso ti andrebbe di supportarci?
sto scrivendo questa storia a cui tengo molto mi farebbe piacere farla leggere a qualcuno
non so se ti va passa
grazie nel caso
@virusthekid
Hi, my name Enoch Agyiri. I'm the writer of 'A Legion of Horizons'.
I understand that you have read the first two parts of my story and I need your feedback.
•Where you able to relate to the characters' dialogue style?
•Did some of the sentences throw you off?
•Did you feel the characters were flat and robotic?
•Was it difficult picturing some of the scenes you read?