vixen0100

this is my first time ever writing a book and i would love some feedback. pls be honest.

tomboylatte

@vixen0100 Thanks for the follow. Here's my honest feedback. Thought the intro was too complex to follow. Liked the beginning, where she is getting him to explain what happened. Except when it came to genital body part. Guess I'm not into very "mature" writing as some are.  Anyway, interesting start.
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