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im so so sorry to bother you, but i was wondering if you could please check out my book "rogue - english version"... i translated it - it was originally in my first language, portuguese - and really wanted a bit of feedback as to how i can improve my writing! if you don't wanna give feedback, that's fine too! it would mean the world to me if you could read it :) here's a description:
          Free yourself from your roots.
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          Kappa was never one to follow the rules but, out of fear, he always did. His footsteps guided him along the usual, routined path, but his eyes searched for any source of adrenaline. The war dragged on before his eyes, time like sand. Even so, Kappa was not like those terrorist rebels who frightened innocent villages. After all, staying on the fence was his specialty.
          But when an enigmatic letter arrives in his mail, everything is about to change.
          here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/241433696-rogue-english-version-%E2%9C%94 
          i hope you like it!

heyo! sorry to bother you, haha but i was wondering if you take reading requests... if so, do you mind checking my new book "to live, to die, to float about in space"? it's not very long, it's actually just a short story! here's the description: This story ends in tragedy.
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          After planet Earth was no longer habitable, what was left of humanity was dumped into a space station and sent out to float in the cosmos. The rules are simple: minor crimes are punishable by prison, but major ones result in an injection which wipes away your memory for 5 minutes - and an oxygen cylinder which lasts the same time.
          Nova's a 19-year-old floating about in space, but she doesn't know why. Slowly, she regains her memory. What did she do?
          hope you like it!

tysm for the follow :)