vyxoxo

@shealyn10 umm Love me , alpha is her book, she just changed the title

cryingforelia

Thank you so so much for voting on my story! Question, how did you find it?

cryingforelia

So my grammars the problem ?
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vyxoxo

Hi there! No problem :D your story is awesome. To be completely honest with you, I understand what kind of a story you are writing. And I understand that as a writer you try to produce chapters as quick as possible to keep up with the demand of new chapters. But the quicker you try to update the lower the quality of your chapters become. You should try to maybe stick more time into a chapter. Because in the beginning your chapters were great and there were barely any mistakes, but towards the latter half of the book there seem to be a big increase in spelling and grammar mistakes. 
            I hope you don't see this as offensive I am just trying to give you my honest review and advice! :D Good luck with your story! <3
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CalliopeBlythe

Hello there! :-)
          
          Thank you so much for giving "Paradise lies" a chance and for voting for the chapters! It means a lot to me. ❤️❤️❤️
          
          I hope you enjoy it and continue to read and vote. :-)
          
          May this new year be an awesome one for you! 
          
          Happy reading! Take care!
          
          Yours,
          Callie

vxrgasm

Hi :) Would you mind reading my story? It's called "Empire" and I would really appreciate it if you could vote/ comment your thoughts on it. Sorry if this annoys/bothers you but I hope you're well and having a nice day anyway! :) Thank you so much! :)

vyxoxo

@vxrgasm No problem!  I love discovering new stories. 
            I'll add it to my library right away!!
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