@wavesinhermind So author, this is a genuine review from me. I read your story and honestly, I feel there are too many unnecessary faltu scenes—like, c’mon, nobody is really interested in those boring raw parts.
Even the college and hostel portions felt stretched and irrelevant. And about Shivang (the MMC)—being influential, I expected him to do something for the FMC, but he literally did nothing. He didn’t care for her at all. That’s not how a fictional male lead should be written—at the very least, he should have kept an eye on her and shown some protective instinct.
And Ruhi’s love angle? I honestly don’t get it. Why did she fall in love with someone who barely cared? She came across as too low-maintenance and desperate, while he gave nothing in return. Please, give your FMC some backbone.
Lastly, I had high expectations, but this book feels like a copy of my favorite author Subh Di’s work. Please try to use your own creativity and avoid copying.