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Hey love❤️ I hope you’re doing okay during this time. 
          
          “ Secrets In The City” it’s really good! Please it out it’s different and very interesting. 
          
          @FortuneEddie is the author. There’s mystery comedy drama romance it has everything. I know you’ll enjoy it and I would love to hear your opinion on it. #supportblackwriters

Constructive feedback: The book has depth! You're going into serious situations. Abuse and bullying are important topics that need to be addressed. Over all I'm liking it. Two thing though, structure and proofreading. A reader like myself wouldn't want to read a gigantic block. Space it out or something be creative. Moving on to proofreading this isn't how you write dialogue my name's jim. You have to add in ". Example "My name's Jim and this is my story". That's what a turns most reads off. When you write that way. 
          
          Totally my opinion anyone doesn't like it juvk rocks please ty. 

Hey can you check.out my true story about me... Its called "The Block" only 8 chapters in but I'd like some feedback on whether its a good read or should i give it up. Plz vote and comment

Hey can u check out my story sinful revenge