ConsciousRoyal

Would you mind doing me a big favour? 
          
          The opening chapter of my book Heists, Hoaxes and Other Hijinx has a very similar meeting of two very different women as in your story. Their relationship is a subplot within a murder mystery. But as a guy, I really need some female feedback on whether their awkward relationship feels authentic.
          
          Would you mind having a look and giving me some honest feedback please?

writtenbyElleRie

@ConsciousRoyal Of course! I'll definitely check it out today and tell you what I think too! I really do appreciate your comments so I can definitely do the same :) xo
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