Nerdilicious09

Hi Zara,
          
          So glad you finally updated again - I thought you had give up on it. I had to go back and reread few previous chapters to get in the groove again. However, I'm a bit confused because the current chapter doesn't flow with the story.
          Prem and Preeti are married, it seems in few previous chapters it might have been like a flash back where he proposes to her.. But then it's back to when they're married. Last update before todays is where she meets his friends from college.. But the today's update is her being nervous about going to America and her telling sangeeta that she's worried about meeting him and being rejected by him again. That makes no sense because it hasn't ever been mentioned in the story in the past that she was rejected by him.
          
          The time line seems to be off or you're just changing the story around? 

x_zaraali03

@Nerdilicious09 Its a one-shot storybook. Each story is different. There is no timeline.
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