Draco Malfoy

hello guys, I would really love if some of you would check my new Draco Malfoy enemies to lovers fanfic. I am a new Writer and I would really really appreciate some advice or suggestions how to make my fanfic better. 
          Thank you sososososo much ☺️

Son? Is that you? Are you a normal one of my sons, or are you also going to say "FaThER iT's YoUR fOUrTh DraACo aND i aLSo gOt mYSELf a POtTer

Hi

https://www.wattpad.com/story/254629274?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=EE0905&wp_originator=LeV662qpDqqEPS1lTcKxz6vWJASV2gn2g8joDfDNvubMiriq5idp7KJajBB%2FUqfGxkNRzSR9VPCPQD%2Bqm0lSb0M0So8GIvUpnLF4k1ESCcrs3pKkfTYXnkh5XKfSEcUm

https://www.wattpad.com/story/221516529-always-and-forever-hermione-granger-dramione-™%EF%B8%8F

*rolls over table*
          did someone say DrAcO mAlFoY?!

ferret

Well, are you going to ask Hermione out are not you hair gelled git of a cousin?

Hey did you meet rumbleroar? XD
          
          

Did voldermort give you a rocket ship and do you still like granger?