@xeronsane_ no hate girlie but in my opinion aapke books mei toxicity kuch zyada he badh gyi thi har time bss toxicity ya fir smut i mean thik h smut likh rhe ho aap kuch chapter it's ok lekin saath mei itne zyada toxic fmc mmc , koi bhi insaan jo fictional book padta h voh itne zyada toxic behaviour nhi padh payega matlab main character toh nhi padh payega Aisa , aur lust ko as love dikhana kyi jagah , force Krna, aur specially late updates , ek book ko complete krne se phele dusri start kr dena aur jo phele start ki thi voh complete hi nhi Krna , matlab dhriti aur suyash ki book aapne kab ka start ki thi aur fir kuch chapter upload krne ke baad use pura bhi nhi kiya ya toh aap start mat kro use ya fir start kr rhe ho toh use complete kro timely , aur main problem is irregular updates , hope ki future mei aap in sab point pe kaam kro you've so much potential ❤️