Arunia7
You know one thing I was confused about in "The Healer and The Killer" is the specific timeline it's based in, from the description this gives me vibes OLDER than even the 17th century (because we had healers and herbs in the book in a battlefield and not specific medicines yk?), and the use of words like battlefield which could infact indicate ancient empires waala time period
But the thing is, whatever time period you have, the language in the book doesn't match that. If we have healers and herbs we probably shouldn't have the casual, day-to-day language between two lovers.
I don't want this to sound rude at all this was js me trying to give constructive criticism, but yeah maybe look into the vocabulary used in that book once I'm sure you're realise what I'm talking about:D
xo_seven_xo
@Arunia7 YEEEE, I DO I DO, DW, the thing is, I don't think that hard abt the language. I like ancient stuff for the fits and setting, the language is eh to me. But now that you mentioned it, I get how it might pull you away from the story. I GET IT. Not rude at all, appreciate you pointing it out.
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