TaintedRain
I'm reworking it and turning it into a trilogy (:
xoshadowgirlxo
loudheartbeats
Thanks for adding 'Truth or Dare' to your reading list! :)
xoshadowgirlxo
@loudheartbeats Np its really good! can't wait til the next update. plz update soon I'm dying! lol. Keep writing❤
Piscesdreamer
Thanks ❤️
Piscesdreamer
Hey I just started my first book xjay_girlx :) its going to be nice I promise would you mind voting & giving feed back please, thanks .
xoshadowgirlxo
@Piscesdreamer I really like your work. I think it's very creative and good. my tips are to add more strong words, and different words from the dictionary. But other than that its a really nice story. and maybe (optional) You can name the chapters. Keep up the good work (I'll be reading your chapter) But keep writing and do what you love❤
xoshadowgirlxo
@UrbanQueenBee Your story is very interesting I just have a few things that would make it better. 1) Make chapters longer like 600-1000 words. (yes I Know is its alot) 2) maybe add more characters. 3) More settings. 4) A plots & solutions. 5) Also you might want to describe the characters more. 6) beginning, middle & end. (I just feel your story is a little all over the place. No offense) I'm not trying to offend you these are just my opinion. And if you need any ideas feel free to message me. And remember keep writing and do what you love❤
UrbanQueenBee
Hey can you read and vote for my book "Ana's Story A journey Of Hope" please and thank you @xXJay_GirlXx
kimberly861
thank you for adding my story in one of your reading list! it really means a lot to me! <3
~Kimberly861
p.s. I hope you're enjoying it so far!