xoshadowgirlxo

@UrbanQueenBee Your story is very interesting I just have a few things that would make it better. 1) Make chapters longer like 600-1000 words. (yes I Know is its alot) 2) maybe add more characters. 3) More settings. 4) A plots & solutions. 5) Also you might want to describe the characters more. 6)  beginning, middle & end. (I just feel your story is a little all over the place. No offense) I'm not trying to offend you these are just my opinion. And if you need any ideas feel free to message me. And remember keep writing and do what you love❤

UrbanQueenBee

@xXJay_GirlXx Thanks for your opinion i understand where your coming from.
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loudheartbeats

Thanks for adding 'Truth or Dare' to your reading list! :)

loudheartbeats

@xShadowJayx Haha, thanks for saying that!
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xoshadowgirlxo

@loudheartbeats Np its really good! can't wait til the next update. plz update soon I'm dying! lol. Keep writing❤
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Piscesdreamer

Hey I just started my first book xjay_girlx  :) its going to be nice  I promise would you mind voting & giving feed back please,  thanks .

xoshadowgirlxo

@Piscesdreamer I really like your work. I think it's very creative and good. my tips are to add more strong words, and different words from the dictionary. But other than that its a really nice story. and maybe (optional) You can name the chapters. Keep up the good work (I'll be reading your chapter) But keep writing and do what you love❤
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xoshadowgirlxo

@UrbanQueenBee Your story is very interesting I just have a few things that would make it better. 1) Make chapters longer like 600-1000 words. (yes I Know is its alot) 2) maybe add more characters. 3) More settings. 4) A plots & solutions. 5) Also you might want to describe the characters more. 6)  beginning, middle & end. (I just feel your story is a little all over the place. No offense) I'm not trying to offend you these are just my opinion. And if you need any ideas feel free to message me. And remember keep writing and do what you love❤

UrbanQueenBee

@xXJay_GirlXx Thanks for your opinion i understand where your coming from.
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kimberly861

thank you for adding my story in one of your reading list! it really means a lot to me! <3
          ~Kimberly861
          
          p.s. I hope you're enjoying it so far!

xoshadowgirlxo

@kimberly861 Your welcome! its really good so far. Please update soon❤ ~xXJay_GirlXx
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