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xoshadowgirlxo
Jul 31, 2015 08:07PM
@UrbanQueenBee Your story is very interesting I just have a few things that would make it better. 1) Make chapters longer like 600-1000 words. (yes I Know is its alot) 2) maybe add more characters. 3...View all Conversations