@PassionInFlames First off, thank you again. I'd be thrilled to have you baby my story and yell at me for mistakes and whatnot, since no one else will, and god knows I need to work on my stuff. I've pretty much become a grammar nerd, but everything else in my stories needs a huge amount of work. You have permission to stalk it, but no climbing in it's windows, snatching it's people up, because it may get a little crowded :P