Hey bro
I just had a couple suggestions for your narusasu book (if you even want them)
Suggestion #1
I would add details to how the two got together ORRRRRRR have the chapter contain smut and the next chapter explains how they got to the certain point (like the sonic movie. Except that was appropriate for kids :D)
Suggestion #2
Do whatever tf you want XD
I honestly really think it could develop into a good story, but so far the description is missing that p i z a z z, and there isnt a plot just yet
Oh wow that is the most ive ever typed
