Hey Yenitha!
I checked out your story and will be happy to give you feedback on it. PM me if you're interested.
I was hoping you could check out my story "Because I'm A Nerd" in return, for I'm really struggling to evolve as a writer due to the lack of feedback. Anything you have to say about it will be appreciated because the way I see it, every thought counts!
Please do check out my book!
*Inserts hope*
Thanks xx