Hey.
So I have posted one of my poems, titled "Eyes don't lie".
I know it sounds pretty clichéd, but please check it out.
I am also writing a story, which I will post soon enough.
Please leave your suggestions. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
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youaremistaken
Dec 14, 2017 10:00AM
Uhhh...new story. Weird concept. Idk what I’m doing with it.It’s a short story. Perhaps it will take you like 10 mins to read it.Hope you enjoyed it.Cheers.View all Conversations
Stories by YouAreMistaken
Eyes don't lie.
"The best lies are crafted out of truth."
Realization
As his eyes closed, the explosions went off.
When 18 year old Erwin manages to make decisions are those the c...