@tejuluv456 well I think you're right somewhere. But while writing the chapters my concentration shifted towards siara with the flow. Ignorance and verbal abuse was what sitara faced. Shaurya in my eyes , was already a sorted and mature man , growing up under the guidance of his grandparents he turned out to be a better man already. He never misbehaved with sitara , he neither had anger issues or any bad traits , so I don't think he needed a character development. Yes he had hate for his mother as a woman and also a certain type of women but that is justified when we look at his childhood.
As far as it is concerned with sitaara's character development, she is the main lead of my book. But the reader's views are what shapes the next chapter. Not a single one wanted to read about her backstory. While this book was ongoing I have had multiple qna's with those readers and they wanted to read about the smooth life of sitara with shaurya and character build up of siara with Aashray.
And somewhere that was justified as well because their life was more wrecked than the other couple. That is the reason I was more focused on Sia's life.
If you want to read about sitara and shaurya I can write a bonus chapter making her recall all her life and you can read her struggles and growth from her point of view.
Do let me know if that can help I'll try to give that asap.
Also thankyou for reading the book and sharing your honest opinion.
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