when is action over done? Because I know that too much at once can make your reader lose interest. Or how do you keep them on edge even if there's a lot of action? would love to have an opinion <3
The best way is to keep your reader on their toes is to add multiple cliffhangers. For example, introduce a soft moment and change it to a different scene to an action one. That why the reader is going to want to know what happened during that soft moment.
@thetalesofsomeone don't listen to them always stick to your good morals! A good friend will respect those morals. There's a verse: "bad company ruins good morals" careful with who you surround yourself with! ❤️
@z0mbi3_slay3r Omg samee, even though I am not christian, I was taught etiquette's of talking and even have a hard time cursing someone, idk mann, it feels so badd. My friends often bully me by saying that I am a goody good girl
Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3