z0mbi3_slay3r

Echo is completed! I started it when I was 16 and stopped around 17. Im now 19 and thought I'd finish it for my younger self. I hope you enjoy it :)

davids108

@z0mbi3_slay3r hello. F4f
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z0mbi3_slay3r

when is action over done? Because I know that too much at once can make your reader lose interest. Or how do you keep them on edge even if there's a lot of action? would love to have an opinion <3

davids108

@z0mbi3_slay3r I think it's having shorter chapters. Super long chapters are excruciating
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z0mbi3_slay3r

great advice! thank you!
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Kris_Khloe

The best way is to keep your reader on their toes is to add multiple cliffhangers. For example, introduce a soft moment and change it to a different scene to an action one. That why the reader is going to want to know what happened during that soft moment.
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z0mbi3_slay3r

As a christian I have such a hard time letting my characters cuss lolll

z0mbi3_slay3r

@thetalesofsomeone don't listen to them always stick to your good morals! A good friend will respect those morals. There's a verse: "bad company ruins good morals" careful with who you surround yourself with! ❤️
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thetalesofsomeone

@z0mbi3_slay3r Omg samee, even though I am not christian, I was taught etiquette's of talking and even have a hard time cursing someone, idk mann, it feels so badd. My friends often bully me by saying that I am a goody good girl
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28lilyemma

Hi, I was wondering if you would be interested in joining my bookclub, please message me if interested
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/341767206?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=28lilyemma&wp_originator=3Y%2BTptkNuzngHJPl1U10DXGFTOVfZVsACsWVjn4CMZaUiDdHPzeK5EkN1JuLwrO%2B%2BMp53M1X7155RHE%2Bf%2FTdUlLSZZdtjPoyTRKI8IJcU8166RzXC1vnTxT2LTWrTpxK

psychoticyu

Heyyyy pretty person!
          
          I would appreciate it if you can give my book a chance, I know I lack a lot, as this is my first novel, but I hope you like it.
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/283311731?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=blackpumpkin&wp_originator=asbYASBJmG3gvnFHbC8fJTqqL6ui41ziB2438wLx1eZSusBs8l2HOzJzc4b0GBPCnTK12LWRqVND5DLLWdlwgVzERCWm3gFh6AB1Fc2X8bpmnnDeoGdBhd6n%2FXxuVQp%2F

z0mbi3_slay3r

oouu looks good i’ll check it out
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3

z0mbi3_slay3r

Thank you for being an amazing writer :))
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