aninhas110902
Hello,
I woud love to have you as an reader of my English project.
Would you mind to have a look on my page?
"Eduardo is a Portuguese boy. People think that he's from the old Portuguese Royal family.
Bianca is a Portuguese girl too. But she lives in England. When she meets Eduardo lots of things may happen. Maybpe cous shes the real princess."
Kiss
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ziellakenni
Hello Margem, I would love to be your reader, are you going to publish a story? I'm lookin' forward to it
First, i want to correct some errors that's in your paragraph you sent
Overall, your story is ok but don't use too much "Portuguese", you can replace "Bianca is a Portuguese girl too" into "Bianca is also the same as Eduardo" and continue the story. "Maybe the reason why a lot of chaos happen to them is Bianca the real princess"
If my notes and corrections are helpful, I would be glad Btw, lookin' forward to your stories
Kiss