Hello Margem, I would love to be your reader, are you going to publish a story? I'm lookin' forward to it
First, i want to correct some errors that's in your paragraph you sent
Overall, your story is ok but don't use too much "Portuguese", you can replace "Bianca is a Portuguese girl too" into "Bianca is also the same as Eduardo" and continue the story. "Maybe the reason why a lot of chaos happen to them is Bianca the real princess"
If my notes and corrections are helpful, I would be glad Btw, lookin' forward to your stories
Kiss
