mmGallardo1
Your story is good, hindi halatang baguhan sa pagsusulat you should continue. Though there are times that you will feel the sudden eruption of the story nor author's mental block but for me, the story is well written and it gives justice to every character. And there is a mystery effect to it that is really really good. Kase as a reader I do have sypnosis as to who is the real gulript and who betrays who. So keep up the good work Author.