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He shocked to see how her pain was affecting him. After Rashmi he had never felt anything for anyone other then his mom and sister. Yes Rashim was his past. A past that he never wanted to remember but could never forget as well. But the way he was feeling for sana, he had never felt for rashmi too. Sana was crying and his heart was aching. He wanted to take away her pain, but didn't know how. He stepped forward and tapped sana's shoulder. Sana lifted her head and looked at him.Ss:- Sana I know you are not ok... but if biji will see you broken like this... she to will breakdown too... her willpower is only helping her right now... and I am sure you don't want to break that... Please don't cry.
Her tears are breaking him from inside. He so want to wipe them off. Sana looks at him and smile weekly. Her eyes are full of pain. She is breaking from inside but still maintains her strength from outside. She wipes her tears.
*2
S:- yaaa... you are right. Biji ke agge me tut nahi sukti.... wo meri or me unki strength hun... thank you app itna support ker rahe ho... but now I think ki apko hotel jana chahiye. Apki kl ki flight bhi hai na?... apko packing bhi to kerni hogi na?Ss:- nahi me kl wapis nai ja raha... wo maa biji ke sath kuch din rehna chahti hain... so..
S:- ok.. me subko chai deti hun.
After a while Sana went to meet biji. She could not see her condition. It was breaking her down badly.
Biji:- putter teri ankhon vich ansu nai dekh sukdi me. Roo na putt.
S:- biji me apko drd me nahi dekh sukti esse... hm na kisi or dr. Ko dikhaenge.. kisi ache dr. Ko... ap thik ho jaoge bohot jaldi... or fir hm pehle ki trhan subhe subhe ganne ke khet chuka ganne khaenge... or na hum fir ghumne bhi jaenge... bs ab ap thik ho jao biji..
*3
Biji:- hae mere putter kitni soni gllan krda hae.. aa ja mere kol.Sana hugs her tightly.
Biji:- putt meri ek gal mane gi?
Sana knew what is coming up next but she had prepared herself for this storm.
S:- haan ji btao?
Biji:- putter tu shadi kerle mere jite ji..
S:- ji biji... ap ladka dhundo me ker lungi..
Biji:- hae sachi... jiundi reh meri dhi (stay alive my daughter)...
Biji then kiss her forehead. Sana could see tears in her eyes and bright smile on her face which actually bought some sukoon in her heart. Sid was seeing all this standing on door. Biji saw him asked him to come and help.
*4
Biji:- Sidharth putter hath de... mujhe baher aana hai.. sub ke pass le chl mujhe.S:- nai biji.. ap plz bethe rahi... ap kahin nai jaoge...
Ss:- biji me bula laya hun sub ko ander..
And he went to call everyone in.
They all were excited as had the idea of what is going to happen next. They entered inside with moist eyes. Biji asked rita aunty to come near her.Biji:- putter me tere ton kuch mangan?
SsM:- han ji biji... ap pucho mt... manglo biji... apko kabhi mna ker sukti hun..
Biji:- me ter Sidharth ka hath manna chahti hun apni sana ke liye. Mere jite ji iski shadi kerwana chahti hun. Iss khush dekhna chahti hun. Agr tujhe or Sidharth ko etraz na ho to?
*5
Sana looked at her dadi with surprise as she was not expecting this to happen. And ofcourse not this soon at all. She had never thought about sid in this sense at all.
Sid's mom looked at him, then back to biji and reverted.SsM:- biji... Neki or puch puch...agr sana mere ghr ki bahu banegi to me he sub se jada khush hongi.. or fir Ammu ke aane se to mere ghr khushiyan he khushian aa jaengi. Mujhe koi etraz nai.
Biji turned towards Sidharth.
Biji:- putter shaadi meri or teri maa ki nai hai.. to teri or sana ki rza mandi bohot jaruri hai.. per me tum dono ko jada wqt nai de sukti. Tum dono ek baar ek dusre se baat ker lo. Agr sahi lga to he hum baat aage bdaenge.
S:- biji mujhe time chahiye.... me haan kerne se pehle kuch baten clear kerna chahti hun... Sidharth se akele me baat kerna chahti hun.
*6
Biji:- haan putter tu lele time. Koi dikat nai. Shehbaaz inhe upper chhat pe chod aa beta.Sid and sana looked at each other. Sana was about to say something but sid cut her in between.
Ss:- haan thik hai.. chalo shehnaaz jo bhi baat kerni hae ker lete hai.
Sana was surprised to hear the urgency in sid's voice. She stepped out of room and baaz took them upstairs and came back leaving them alone there.
At first it was a little awkward for them but then sana spoke up breaking the silence.
S:- It is really difficult for me to accept you as my husband. Actually... I just want to clear a few things before we decide anything. First of all Ammu will always stay with me... secondly I don't want 2nd kid. So you will never force me for that... and thirdly I will continue with my career.
*7
Ss:- I accept all your demands. I don't have any issue with this.S:- anything you want to say or want me to accept?
Ss:- nothing..
His phone rang and he excused himself.
Ss:- you please go down. I'll be there in a few mins.
Sana just nod and move down. After a few minutes sid came down and found everyone still in Biji's room.
Biji:- to kya hai tum dono ka fensla putter?
S:- biji wo...
Ss:- biji hmari hasn hai... per meri ek shar hai...
Everyone was shocked hearing this. Even sana was looking at him with surprise.
*8
Biji:- haan putter bolna?Ss:- biji me chahta hun ki kl subhe he hmari shadi ho jae..
Sana was shocked hearing this. She was continuously looking at him. Trying to understand what exactly he was saying... what exactly he wants to do. It wasn't that they were in love from long.. moreover they didn't even know each other earlier. All of a sudden it was difficult for her to disgust this. She want to know the exact reason behind this.
SM:- per putter enni cheti?
SsM:- haan beta itni bhi kya jaldi hai? Hm arma se kerrenge na shaadi. Pure dhum dham se me beti ko ghar laungi.
Sid what he said has appeared as shock to everyone. But he maintained his poker face and reverted back.
Ss:- meri yahi shart hai. Agr manzur hae to boliye? Biji fensla apka hae.
*9
Biji accepted this fact because she knew it would have been something urgent that cannot be denied.Biji:- putter mujhe manzur hae. Shaadi kl he hogi. Hm gurudware me phere kerke sana ko bida ker denge.
SD:- per biji enni cheti tyari kese hogi? Shadi ka joda bhi nahi liya? Mehendi... chuda.. kuch bhi nahi kiya hmne to? Or fir iski shaadi ke to kitne arman the hmare... meri lado ko kitne shor shrabe se bida kerne ka socha tha mene..
Biji:- to kya hai? abhi to puri shaam padi hai... khub dhum mchao sare.. (looking towards sana's mom) tu apna shaadi ka jode la... sana wo pehne gi... or fir chuda lene chale jana.. is subhe shadi se pehle baaz pehna dega usse.. or tum dono milker lga dena mehendi usse raat me... o beta ye sb to rasme hain... Inka kya hai... or fir hm ghar ke sb log to hain he yahan... meri bachi sada khush rahe bs ye important hai.