Likes – I absolutely loved the hook. I liked how your voice reflected in each of your chapter. Your writing style is amazing, each perspective was very clear and apt. Awesome efforts, there weren’t any grammatical or punctuation errors, I could clearly see you’ve put quite a lot of hard work in the book, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading each chapter.
Dislikes – There’s just one. I didn’t quite like the cover, or maybe it’s just me? I mean I got the relevance, it matches the title and all. But I don’t know it just didn’t quite intrigue me like the description and the plot did.
Anyway, awesome work and great efforts, keep writing!
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Likes – I really liked the plot and the entire concept behind the storyline. There weren’t any spelling mistakes so that was good as well. I loved the title, the fact that this story’s protagonist was the guy while most stories have the girl as the protagonist intrigued me and also sets you apart.
Dislikes – There had been certain punctuation errors. Also, the description wasn’t that interesting as the actual story was. There are a lot of stories with almost the same plot, so I suggest you include those things in your description that sets you apart from these other stories, does that make sense?
Awesome work, keep writing!
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Likes – I’ve read a lot of stories where everything starts with a one night stand, but this one was kind of unique so that was a plus point. The title matches with the plot of the story and is relatable. Your voice was very clear from the way you wrote.
Dislikes – I see you haven’t updated in a very long time, I suggest you do so because that creates a bad impression on the readers. I get that you may have your personal reasons for not updating, so you could add a chapter explaining why you haven’t. There were a few typos here and there, certain punctuation errors.
Anyway, great work, keep writing!
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