Love at first sight//Louis partridge

Promises 🤍

Jacks POV
So like about 8 months of living with my bestie,gf,and friend it was good and loud if you know what I mean *cough* L&Y *cough* umm but over all we all had an Ellen show a week ago and y/n got pissed on live at the Ellen show because Ellen was a bitch and brought up her dead father but all good we sewed Ellen and
y/n got like one hater but they gave up because of my fandom ofc but umm we don't talk about the Ellen show it was good then thing took a turn for the worse
Louis's POV
Y/n was still mad about what happened on the Ellen show and I got to say I would be too but "baby plz stop ignoring me!" "........."
"What did I do wrong she was the one who did the drama!" As I said that she tucked her head under the blanket "fine!"
No OnES PoV
*louis coming downstairs*
J:still not talking?
L *mad*:No!
J:damm your THAT mad huh?
L:lisen! If you where in my problem what would you do?
J:well tell me everything
L:well ignores me,no cuddles,no kisses,turns her back around when I talk to her,randomly screams at her phone when she sees HER!
J:well have you tried plan b?
L:plan b?
J:yeah,like snacks flowers things she likes
L:what does she love?
J:you, men's rings,chains,eyeliner,her fans
L:so what if I got her a new outfit she can where and some of her favorite snacks?
J:that works!
L:.....can you come?
J:why?
L:well I don't know y/n's ring size,and I think it's a good time to give her a *wisper* promise ring if she forgives me...
J:ok now I'm coming! Also she loves fast food so ima get some McDonald's when we are on our way back
L:ok deal!
AFtEr ShOpPiNg(it's a surprise so you can't know what they got you)

J:ok *parks car* you get the stuff I will get y/n to watch tv for a little give me a signal and you will take her to the room
L:ok *get out car* open the trunk!
J:*gets inside and finds you* hey...want to watch tv,
Y:*silence*
J:plz cmon I want to hear why you are so pissed and get your feelings out,cmon
*drags you to the couch* Ok tell me why that was so personal!
*you start to say why and why you are pissed at Ellen so much while Louis get the stuff ready*

*20mins later*
J:wow....that was umm very deep...
y:yeah! That's why I am pissed at her!
J:wait so your so mad because you wished you could like do something to change things?
Y:yeah but I didn't because I didn't know what my old friends would think about me
J:well know you can leave that to us ok? Bub?
Y:yeah?
J:someone waiting for you upstairs if you know what I mean....
Y:wtf did y'all do!
J:nothing bad just go! He's waiting
Y:is it louis-
J:JUST FUCKIN GO!
Y:ok! Ok!
J: *goes live so people can see*
Y:ok now I don't want to! Your recording!
J:just plz go!
Y:fine...
*you open to door to Louis with a rose and candles on the nightstands (your favorite food) on the bed and a new outfit*
Y:ok nice job being cheesy but what is going on!
L:baby.....
Y:no,I'm scared for what you are going to say!
L:baby you know I will always love you...
Y:yes.....
L:and before I do anything else,I want to give you this...
*opens a promise ring box*
L:baby,i love you forever and I give you this ring to give you the promise that no matter what I will always love you...
Y:always?....
L:even on you bad days,moody days your loud music your crying,all because I can't stand keeping my eyes off your eyes your lips your hair your wonderful outfits you where,and most importantly....I can't stand the way you love me like I do
J:awww- shit I just ruined the moment-
Y:you didn't but louis...I won't take this ring
L&J:WHAT?!
Y:because.. 16 years ago my dad gave my mom this *opens a ring that says forever on it* and my mom told me when my dad died give your loved one that you trust with all your heart *comes closer to Louis* this ring and give it to your child and let this start your family,OUR family.....*puts ring on Louis finger* starting now...
L:will you take mine?
Y:only if you take my ring and pass this on to our family one day..
L:I will
Y:then i guess i will too
*you look up to Louis and see he is crying*
Y:why are you crying?
L:i don't want to lose you babe
*kisses you and hugs*
J:got damn I can finally talk with out saying aww damm guys I want this *starts to cry*
Y:oh you think I don't got a promise ring for a bestie?
J:*wipes tears* a what no I wasn't crying why would you think that what?
Y:here jack *you give him a ring box*
J:ima set up my phone really quick *sets up phone and opens box to see a letter*
Y:read the letter out loud
J:to whom it may see this letter from Y/n,if you are reading this it mean I fucking love you with all my heart before and now (except for my boyfriend) tho if you are reading this I don't know you but I do know this
Jack...
I know what time and you have gone through
*starts to cry*
But I will remember the time we where at the skate park and people made fun of you and called you a poser and I saw you trying to hold back you tears and I stood up for your ass and hurt them kids and we went back home together and you where still crying and I loved you so much I cooked food for your dumb ass and you stayed over for a week and that week- *not the note* y/n- *back to note* that week- made me think it was worth the bleeding hand for you and you put lover on my cast just like how you had it on IT and we hung out all the fucking time from then go if you see this jack-
This ring was the ring that you told me you always wanted when you get a lover now I'm not a lover but ima loser..... love you Jakie
J:fuck y/n
*you come and hug him so he's not embarrassed on the live*
Y:Jack look *you turn the ring a different way so it shows Jack Grazer and with the Spotify code "play with fire"*
J:you did not!
Y:yes I fucking did
J:GUYS! *shows live* thanks bestie
Y:also I write funny notes like tell my cousin she has like 10 different notes from her birthday and Christmas of just my notes
J:Louis you got your self a good fucking person
L:I know I did
*you play knee socks by arctic monkeys on the tv*
Y:thanks for the outfit babe
*wispers In your ear* L:can't wait to see you with it on or off..
Y:no
L:I was smooth tho right?
Y:maybe...
J:ok! Ok enough talking but Guys we all got promise rings today! Who would of fuckin knew!
L:but mine was better
Y&J:Umm no
L:why!
Y:the presentation I gave to two idiots here is amazing
J:hey but I won with the coolest one
Y:that is correct
L:but I won with the most romantic one
Y:what do I win a pack of gummies
J:where!?
L:downstairs
J:oooh! Ok thanks y/n for the ring ima hang up this note and leave y'all alone
Y:bye bestie
L:bye jack
J:adios!
~ROmaNTiC TaLk~
Louis is laying down and you where standing
Y:so baby? *so said slowly while getting next to him*
L:yes
Y:do you like the ring I gave you?
L:I like everything you give me
Y:awww but not that smooth
L:ugh! When what is smooth to you?
Y:nothing just trying to see how long you would go
L:wow
Y:sorry but nice tries
L:thanks
Y:anyways *lies next to Louis looking at the roof* what made you get me all this stuff
L:why? You don't like it?
Y:I mean yeah but like i was kinda mean to you this week
L:babe I don't care if you acted like that,I get it you got pissed with Ellen,because of what happened and you are letting your emotions take over and you forgot you have me and Jack to talk to
Y:yeah i guess i did.. was i annoying when I yelled?
L:meh I mean I'm surprised you still cussed out your phone because of something but,
Y:oh... well umm I will not yell again to my phone, mostly because I broke it after tossing it to our window but my package should be here with a new one
L:so your problem is fixed
Y:not yet
L:why? What else do you need babe?
Y:to know if you really forgive me?
L:does this help?
*kisses you*
Y:yeah i guess
L:ok,now ima check on jack to make sure he isn't jumpy from his present you got him and you can take a shower
Y:your saying I smell?
L:no I'm saying you should get a restart and go back to normal? You know just not you screaming and more conversation,and possibly more cuddles?
Y:sure babe
*you kiss him and go to the bathroom*

(Hey y'all sorry I didn't post anything but here I am and I was getting some ideas and thought for you and Louis to get a closer relationship so I did this also I have been watching more romance crap to learn how to write these things but so far going good bye now!)