Hello everyone, I know that I had just promised to update more and told you all that I had a lot in store for this book but a lot of things came up.
First of all, this book was a Todorokixreader. It said it in the title, for the people (Who's rude comments I deleted and blocked) who said that it should have been a Bakugoxreader, you are not the author- I am. If you wanted to read a Bakugoxreader than you shouldn't have decided to read this book, it literally said Todorokixreader in the title.
Secondly, I know that my writing wasn't the best, I don't mind critisism but some of you were just plain rude to me. This was my first book and I tried really hard to make it well, it really hurt my feelings when people messaged me through Tik Tok about how bad my book was, or how the story sucked. I'm sorry if you felt that way, and thank you if you didn't say anything about it and just dropped the book.
This was my story, I had ideas of my own and I came up with the plot so I don't need anyone to tell me otherwise.
So, due to the following, I will be ending this book here. I may plan on creating a new one, as I blocked all the people who left the negative comments and blocked those who have messaged me. But before I end this one, I just wanted to leave you all with the notes I made for the chapters I would've wrote- I planed on writing around 30 or 40 chapters but of course that'll be cut.
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-After beating Ida, no one knows where you went and Todoroki goes off to find you
-He fails and assumes you'll be back in time for the battle between you and him, as he walks down an empty hallway a glimmer of blue catches his eye
- you show up to the battle with your head down and hands behind your back
-you walk up to Todoroki, shake his hand and pull him into your embrace
-'I'm sorry, Shoto. She made me do it, but I really did want to be your friend. Thank you for being mine.'
-he looked at you weirdly as you walked back across the field and sat down
-the battle begins and he freezes you to the floor- you don't move
- just as he approaches you, a purple cloud appears behind you and Dabi walks out and places a hand on the ice around you
-'good job kid,' he looks at todoroki, 'sorry but we'll be taking her back now.'
As the ice around you melts, Dabi holds with one arm and holds his other hand out infront of him, pretty much threatening Todoroki to not take a step closer. As the purple cloud begins to surround the two of you, Todoroki runs towards you just for Dabi to cover him with his blue flames.
- just know that you really did like him, you let out a loud scream as Todoroki runs through the flames and reaches his arms out for you- he as well is taken in the purple cloud.
-if you're still confused, you're apart of the LOV- and you were the UA traitor, you were supposed to lose to Todoroki and 'go to a new school', that would be how you'd leave back to the LOV.
-as you arrived at the base of the LOV, Dabi tied both you and Todoroki up.
-he tortured you to try to get Todoroki to spill the extra info that you couldn't get while at UA
-he can't say anything, he doesn't say anything while Dabi practically burns your skin off
-I basically moved the timeline of Bakugo's capture right after the sports festival, so he and Todoroki switched roles in that arc- him being captured and Bakugo having to save you two.
-the torture goes on and Todoroki still hasn't spilled anything, he just looked at his feet as your screams filled the room- that is until she walked in.
- looking bright as ever, you're mom walks in the room and stops Dabi from any further harm towards you.
So, I planned for your mom to be a villain, once she was revealed I would do a little flashback of how you came to be apart of the LOV. In a nutshell, the year after your mom had vanished, she came back and convinced you to help her out- you would have to train your hardest to get into UA and she would explain what else to do from there.
She told you her plans when you got in and revealed that she was apart of the LOV- that's why you didn't die while Shigaraki held you by your neck, he knew he couldn't kill you but he had to convince the other students that you didn't even know him. That's also why Kurogiri taunted you, to play with the other students.
-Your mom excuses Dabi and sits in front of you and Todoroki
-'my daughters told me about you, she really cared for you.'
-'you shouldn't have tried to save her though, this is no place for the son of a hero.'
-she explained what you did and exposed your true intentions, telling him that you were just a pawn that she was using to get info from the heros.
-Todoroki didn't look at you after that, his cheeks were wet from tears when your mother told him that you knew what you were doing and that's why you shut everyone out.
-'liar. she would't do that, your a liar!'
-your mom laughs as Todoroki tries to defend you while you just silently cry, that's when you realize that you had romantic feelings for him and that you didn't want to be a villain or help them at all.
-before your mom can finish, the door slams open and Endeavor of all people walks in
-your mother jolts up and sends a blast of energy, he followed her attack with a gust of flames that burned her and cause her to faint- she was burned alive and died there (Obviously the battle was going to be a lot more intense, Endeavor would've been harmed as well but I didn't want to get too much into detail)
-Endeavor runs towards Todoroki and You and begins untying his son while Todoroki kept moving towards you, as he finished he threw Todoroki over his shoulders and covered his mouth as smoke filled the room(from his flames)
-Todoroki kicks and punches at his dad but he drags him out, leaving you to burn along with your mother. The last thing you see is Todoroki reaching out for her before3 her eyes shut close and everything feels hot.
Hello everyone! I'm writing this a few weeks after I decided to end this book, by the time the changes to this chapter are changed my announcement for the second book will be out!! It won't follow the plot of the manga or anime, as I have a story made up.
I would like for you all to know that I will be finishing the next book! I will not take any negative criticism from anyone, but I do not mind respectful tips and things you guys thin could be different! I really appreciate all the support I've been given while I was not writing it gave me some confidence and I am ready to jump back into the game and make a good story!!
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