This is my first plz no hate. criticism allowed. thx.
no more updates here. Having a retry caused by bad planning and writing. Here is the link to the new one.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/290008942-karmic-retribution-sans-x-bnha
So I'm walking to UA with shinsou beside me after teleporting to the entrance. The place looks huge. I'm walking really slow because I feel like it and I then shinsou disappears ahead. 'welp I lost my brother.' I then see Izuku midoriya with a weird ghostly villain looking person behind him.(please note only people aware of AU's can see them unless they want to show them selves but no one can see the souls unless the souls want to.)'Wait is he aware of AU's too? If he is... I get geno to float behind me and Izuku seems to notice geno and me. He has the face of shock as we stare at each other. I check him again.
Welp nothing to worry I think as I teleport inside.
Izuku P.o.v
'wait where did sans go?' I think. "Huh, you okay," the girl asked.
"Yea I'm fine" I reply.
'That sans guy' V!izuku asked, 'I don't pick fights with him. He's hiding a lot.'
'If Sans scared V!izuku then he's really something.' I think.
Aizawa P.O.V
'Huh, nothing about sans at all, nothing. By records the only he was seen was when I met him. His quirk is extremely strong why isn't he on record?' I think, 'I've been searching everything on Sans yet there's nothing. I can't ask him either, he's extremely good at lying. why? At least I'm keeping close watch on him. He hates bullies and murderers and there ever since I met him and searching for him a new case file opened. about a vigilante. they said about feeling sins crawling on there back with each person depending on what they have done having different damage from a couple of scrapes to missing limbs. they describing seeing blaster. they couldn't see there face but the ones that did say that he looked like skeleton some looking like a judge or the grim reaper. JUDGE, isn't that what he call himself. And they all started from one day after he appeared. WHO ARE YOU SANS. other than that he is a very nice kid cracking puns, normal teenage stuff.
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I will make his backstory a different chapter a different day but seriously plz give me some advice or feedback through comments. also thanks for the 229 views next milestone 300.
