This is my first plz no hate. criticism allowed. thx.
no more updates here. Having a retry caused by bad planning and writing. Here is the link to the new one.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/290008942-karmic-retribution-sans-x-bnha
So I'm inside the school sitting next to deku waiting for what's next. I see loudspeaker 'present mic' walk on to the stage and talk about the entrance exam to get in and I fall asleep. Izuku is mumbling a lot though and it makes it hard to sleep. A kid who acted like a literal robot with his hand asked a question and then directed his hand to me and izuku and insulted us about disturbing the presentation. izuku looks like he is really embarrassed but I woke up and said, "that golden coming from you."
"What does that mean?" he replied.
"Look you are standing, averting everyone's attention to 2 kids than the teacher in which you are making a distraction." I said.
"Then please stop sleeping and stop mumbling in such an important assembly." he said as he sat down. I check sonic 'Iida'.
The testing has begun as I teleport myself to a roof-top as I am feeling sleepy. I see one of the cameras and flash my eyes blue to the camera to tell Aizawa to be a bit patient. (Aizawa still doesn't know what aus or the souls are but sans said its a way to communicate such as light blue= patient)
*Aizawa*P.O.V*
'Light blue means to be patient' Aizawa thinks. "what is that kid doing on the ceiling oh I wonder." said Nezu. "He has a plan." I tell him.
"Oh, really, how would you know unless if you knew him. Like a father-son relationship" Nezu spoke in his soothing voice, He also has your tendencies to sleep and those bags under his eyes" 'damn Nezu is smart' I think, 'well obviously he is the principal of this school, and truthfully why do I care... Wait where my sleep bag!' I start looking around and I see Mic pull out my yellow comfy bag also now I'm making a mental note to restock all my bags around the school. "yea, I adopted him after I found him." I said, "though he had the sleeping problems even before I met him."
"What happened to his family?"All might questioned.
"Don't know, he would escape and never tell, I checked through records and he doesn't even exist." I said, "So I keep him at my house to keep the kid safe in my house since his quirk is so dang strong."
*All Might POV is here*
*This kid lives with aizawa and aizawa seem fond of him which is rare. he also seems to trust him a lot but that kid knows my quirk now. I have to keep a close eye one wrong step and he could become a villain and since he knows my quirk now he would be even more dangerous.*
*Nezu*POV*
'Those eye bags indicate insomnia and nightmares and the kid has a lot of power. Aizawa trusts him a lot and that rare meaning this kid could turn out to be amazing. but no records, no past, and a lot of 'power' that intimidates even Aizawa. the wait is that that blood? I look closely and I see a thin stream of blood flowing down his shirt. Is that why he's taking a break, and/or is the reason he looked for cameras. If I say that here then he will be pulled out and won't be able to attend U.A. But I still should say something because it might be dangerous, but I will pull him out if the testing becomes too dangerous, but the 0-pointer could be dangerous. plus I want to see if quirk and if it is extremely strong then the best course of action is to get him into U.A. to keep him in check and after the test, I could ask him about the blood, yes that seems right.' I think to myself. Nezu sir, I think we should release the 0-pointers since it has been a long time. "Huh? Ah yes, I will press it now." I say as I press the red button to release the 0-pointer. I get hit by a memory of a peculiar dream today of a person named Gaster or something. He said I will meet a person very, very, interesting... And now that I think of it they look very similar. maybe father and son, but then what his quirk, and what did he mean by I've chosen to attach to your soul.
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(gaster but imagine goopier and yes nezu will know about gaster.)
Sans P.O.V
As I'm on the building I realize that I'm bleeding. the slash wound must have reopened. welp still got to take this test. I teleport down and I gaster blast a couple of robots and then teleport somewhere else and keep doing it. I'm running out of energy though, what should I do. I should fire at the weak points so that mean I should fire at the joints... they are weakest in robots. I turn around and see a huge robot and I think, 'wait a damn minute is that the zero pointers.' its hand comes crashing down and I run to the side to dodge, "Aghhh" I yell as I bump my scar. The joints fire at the joints I think as I send sharpened bones to the robot's leg joints. All of a sudden the zero pointers come crashing down. I get on a gaster blaster and ride to the top surveying things I sent a lot of gaster blasters to locations with a lot of robots. I hear a BOOM and I turn around to see izuku destroy a zero pointer.
"Damn, kids got power," I say to myself.
I hear a BEEEEP and the tournaments over.
*****
I with izuku and uraraka and izuku says, "You were amazing Sans!"
"Thanks, "I say back.
"your punch to the zero pointer was pretty damn powerful too," I say.
"yeah but it was a zero pointer and that the only thing I fought so I probably going to fail." he says.
"Maybe not," I say, "you saved uraraka even though you could fail and because you acted that way you could pass the entrance."
"by the way you are izuku right?" Uraraka ask.
"Yea I am." says izuku as he turns red.
"Thanks for saving me from that zero pointer!" she says.
"you're welcome," he says as he looks flustered.
"Welp hope you both pass but I gotta go," I say as I snap my fingers and teleport.
