3. Making a single person passive in the relationship
Relationships aren’t about one person seizing control of the other and making all the choices.
Both people should be equally as active in the ongoings of the partnership. Because it’s just that — a partnership.
This makes it a little concerning when writers make a single person who just goes with the flow and doesn’t really care about much. This person doesn’t initiate anything, make any choices for the sake of the relationship and when going gets tough, they sit back and let the other person do everything.
This is both unrealistic and just plain boring. It doesn’t add anything interesting to the dynamic of the relationship and readers won’t root for them.
Make sure you’re writing a romantic relationship between two people, not between a person and a passive robot.
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Article by Bella pope
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