Chapter 1 my dear Mayura

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First off guys I am sorry for not updating princess justice I just had an idea for a new story so yeah ill try and update princess justice as soon as possible when I get ideas Oh and one last thing this starts at the begining of miracle queen so now ON WITH THE STORY Also I do not own miraculous ladybug in any condition I am doing Point of veiws and also lines from the episode so this story make's sence  

Update: Hi guys I am posting this on all my storys Please try and provent Cussing in the comment sections I have realized recently that people have been cussing in my comment sections and I would like you to please stop sorry about this and now on with the story 


Hawkmoth heads to the top of the building were mayura stands he felt so guilty for making her use the miraculous but this time he felt it he was bound to win! he walks over to mayura as she stands a dizzy spells goes over her and causing her to lose balance 

 hawkmoth: Mayura!!

Mayura: Im all right

hawkmoth: Of all the plans I've concocted I never wanted this

Hawkmoth: Forgive me for needing you again one last time

Mayura: Don't blame yourself from the very first day I knew that I'd do anything for you

Mayura: Little Amok give body to hawkmoth sentimonster again! Sentimonster I am mayura you will now obey hawkmoth!

hawkmoth: destroy the sheild! 


The Sentimonster Obeyed hawkmoth's command and went for the sheild and pounded it several times with all its might it brought dizzyness to mayura but she said nothing of it she didnt want to be the reason there master plan failed so she kept going with the sentimonster

hawkmoth and mayura watched as ladybug and cat noir jumped out of the water with ladybug unifying both the dragon and ladybug miraculous 

Hawkmoth: A few extra powers aren't gonna save you you know in a few moments when the old gaurdian is to weak and his sheild is broken i'll force him to tell me your secret identities and it will be all thanks to ladybug! she led you all to your own doom!

Cat noir: Its us against the world 

Ladybug: As always!

Cat noir: Ladybug and I never fight each other! We fight togather

Ladybug: Welcome to your doomsday Hawkmoth!

Hawkmoth: You fools!  its time to Take action my queen!


Ladybug and cat noir start to fight against miracle queen's pawns and so far they already have lost Viperion and cat noir unifyed with the snake miraculous 

Hawkmoth: NO we lost viperion

Mayura: Don't worry we still have Rena Rouge, Pegasus, and King monkey they will win! 

A shot of dizzyness Went to mayura's head it was a very strong one she started to wobble but said nothing of it to hawkmoth as they watched the battle

Miracle queen had just been defeated and hawkmoth released another akuma twards Chloe ladybug purified it Then Chloe Started putting on all the miraculous 

Hawkmoth: I dont even need to do anything! I knew you were one of us Chloe Bourgeois!!

Mayura: Hawkmoth I cant hold the sentimonster Much longer 

Hawkmoth: We will go back soon if chloe fails I promise my dear mayura 

Chloe is now yelling at the kwami's to transform her 

Hawkmoth: there's nothing you can do anyway I already won its moments before that sheild caves in then the gaurdian will be at my mercy your friends are about to transform back! your on your own checkmate ladybug!

Ladybug: I still have one move left hawkmoth!  LUCKY CHARM!!!!!!!!!!! a keyring what am I supposed to do with this!

Ladybug looks around for idea's that she can use her lucky charm for but nothings showing up

Hawkmoth: Nothing! theirs nothing you can do my plan was perfect you can't beat me!

now we skip to the part were Master Fu gives miracle box to ladybug

Master Fu: I wang Fu  Hereby relinquish the Miracle box and name Ladybug the new Guardian!

And as soon as he give up the miracle box The sheild finnaly caved in 

Hawkmoth: NO!!

The miracle box floated into the air as it started to transform into the new miracle box and It fell into chloe's hands

Chloe: No its my miracle box! Mine  im the guardian! I'm the queen! Hawmoth tell them to give me my box back!

Mayura: Hawkmoth I can't hold the sentimonster it's using too much of my strength 

Mayura tried to stay awake it was too hard hawkmoth picked her up 

Hawkmoth to chloe: How dissapointing 

Hawkmoth jumped onto the sentimonster holding her dear nathalie in his arms He felt more guilty than ever making her use it one last time Mayura was struggling to stay conscious Mayura destroyed The sentimonster as they reached an allyway and both detransformed Gabriel was worrying like crazy if he had not made Nathalie use that miraculous one last time she would probaly be just fine he opened the door to his car set nathalie in and then

Gabriel:  Oh my Nathalie there are no words to express how sorry I am I've failed yet again and you have used every last bit of your strength for nothing 

This part I changed up the scene  a bit bc its kind of ridiculous that gabriel can just fix the peacock miraculous just like that 

Nathalie: No not for nothing theres a deciphered version of the grimoire stored on the gaurdians tablet now we can Power up our suits like ladybug and Chat noir and we will suceed one day 

Gabriel Closed the passenger Door and rushed to the drivers seat He started driving twords the mansion he checked on nathalie every couple minutes by the 5th time he checked she was out cold (Not dead she's unconsious) 

Gabriel: don't worry my dear Nathalie I will make sure your ok but please stay with me 

To be continued







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