Highest points in introduction and tied for best grammar
You lost points in with your title and cover, it's not that it was bad, but I often found myself forgetting the title of your book compared to the other entries. Also in my opinion the title carried way more points than it should have, but unfortunately I had to judge based on criteria.
Also the competition was incredibly strong and there was a very narrow margin of the three winning books so I think you should be extremely proud of your work.

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Challenge entries, reviews and awards
PoetrySome new contest entries, and assorted stories and poems I have entered in various contests over the years that have achieved a modicum of recognition. I trot them out for your consideration.