IMPORTANT PLEASE READ:
Hey guys, first off I just want to thank everyone for the support. It means so much to me that you guys are enjoying the book. (You comments just make my day).
Secondly I want I get your opinions. See in addition to writing this book, I have also been working on some side projects. I have got three stories that I have written just not published.1) one piece in wonderland. This contains some Yanderes, drama, comedy, etc. And includes a broad cast of characters. There's a ton of detail, I really want to make you feel the (reader) is truly in wonderland.
2) a Yandere doctor law x patient. This is a modern hospital setting, where a cold doctor becomes too attached to his patient. Again broad cast of character to support the story, but the main focus is Law.
3) this is set in one piece universe, on the hearts submarine. A dark, cruel, Law experiments on his newest test subject. A odd relationship being to form. It's a little unhealthy, but hey that makes for drama. (Also I would make it clear to never encourage bad relationship).
Here the thing, I want you're guys opinions on these, because I have 5000+ words on all these stories. I could be giving you eight chapters right into it, without having to make you guys wait.
PLEASE COMMENT leg me know what you guys think. I can't read your minds so you have to tell me.
NOW TO BE CLEAR: The story below is not part of the on going story line. This is a bonus chapter, just something to keep you guys entertained, while I finish up the rest of the book. I apologize for any grammar mistakes I wrote this in about an hour.
Once again thanks for the support, please comment, and enjoy the bonus chapter :)
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"Uggghh... why is it so hot today?" I said, sweat pouring down my face. My skin felt like it was on fire. I sat inside the pod, trying to stay out of the direct sunlight. Last thing I needed was skin cancer.
I fanned myself with the sailor's diary, "Mmm..." I moaned out, thankful for any kind of breeze. 'Wonder if the sailor would consider this disrespectful to fan myself with his personal notebook?' I thought to myself. Suddenly I was thrown against the wall of the pod.
"Ooof" talk about a punch to the...well the entire left side of my body.
"(Reader)!!!" A loud boyish voice called. Of course.
I crawled out of the pod, to see Luffy smiling like he didn't just body slam my ship.
"(Reader)!! It's about time you woke u-, woah! What happened to you? You're all wet and shinny" Luffy bluntly said.
A noticeable tik mark appeared on my forehead, but I kept my composure. "I've been roasting all day, it's a million degrees out here."
Luffy had a aloof look, "really? Doesn't feel that warm, are you sure you're not hallucinating?" He said.
'I wish.' I thought. "That's easy for you to say, you're in the water 24/7. And no, I'm not hallucinating"
"Oh ya, I forgot" Luffy scratched the back of his head, with a big dumb smile painting his face.
I sighed, 'of course a fish would forget he lives in water'. I looked back at Luffy, his smile had morphed into a grin.
"You know... if you're hot, I could cool you down" he said, but there was something glistening in his eyes.
"Really? is that another one of your siren powers?"
"Yup, but I have to be touching you to make it work". I was suspicious, but I was desperate to cool off.
"Okay then..." I nervously look around "how does this work?" I asked.
"Come over to the edge"
"Okay" I said doing as he asked.
"You've got to come closer (reader)" I leaned over the railing.
"Even closer" I was gonna fall if I kept going.
"Perfect" suddenly Luffy grabbed my hand I pulled me overboard. I went head first into the water. I gasped for air when I surfaced.
"See does that feel better?" Luffy said, laughing uncontrollably.
"Luffy!!!" I screamed, "I gonna kill you!" I said swimming after him. Luffy just kept laughing, he was swimming slowly, pretending I could catch him.
"Ahhh! When I get my hands on you!!" I stared at Luffy who was a few feet ahead of me. I was surprise when I felt two arms wrap around my waist, and a broad chest press against my back.
"Oya Oya? Did I hear something about killing Luffy, (reader) you know that my job" Law spoke into my ear.
"Law" I called his name in shock, he chuckled at this.
"Tra-guy" Luffy whined "stop butting in and let (reader) go" luffy complained, swimming over to us.
"I what if I don't want to?" Law said, turning his back to Luffy, with me still in his arms.
"Then i'll just have to take her from you", Luffy stretch his arm like out like rubber, grabbing me. I was pulled from Law's grasp. Luffy possessively hugged me against his chest.
Law frowned, "you known, you show be more careful with her straw-hat. After all (reader)'s a one of a kind"
"Says you!" Luffy yells "you break all your toys" he says sticking his tongue out. The two went on bickering, while I was stuck between them.
'Oh you have got to be kidding me' I thought.
I pushed away from Luffy, surprising him. "excuse me, but do I get a say in this?" They both turned to me, wide eyed, I guess they forgot I existed for a while there.
"If you don't mind, I would prefer to get out of the water and back on my ship".
"Of course" Law took my hand, "allow me to escort you" he said.
Luffy grabbing my unoccupied hand and pulled me towards the latter "no (reader) allow me" Luffy said, stating Law dead in the eye.
They were back at it again...
"I CAN GET TO THE LATTER BY MYSELF THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!"
After my outburst, they released me."Ugh.. thank you" I said climbing onto the ship.
Even after I was onboard the boat, Law and Luffy pulled themselves up as well. They sat beside me, squishing me in the middle
I sighed, 'goodness forbid, they're apart from me for more than 10 seconds' I thought.
My face was lifted towards Law as he gripped my chin. "Why so glum (reader)? You're not thinking about your old life again are you?
"Well actual-" I tried to speak but was interrupted.
"Don't be silly tra-guy, why would (reader) think about that when she has us?" Luffy said, leaning his head against my shoulder.
I knew there was no point trying to talk to them, they hated hearing about my life prior to them. I gave up, and decided to lie, well half-lie.
"Sorry, I guess I'm just tired from heat and swimming" I said.
"Aww, well then, let me ease you exhaustion" Law said, picking me up and placing me on his lap. His actions surprised me, his scales felt weird against my butt.
"Hey no fair!" Luffy said. Law just smirked at him. Luffy then flopped down, laying his head on my lap. His black hair tickled against my thigh.
Law press my head against his chest, "Now you can rest" he said.
I was a little uncomfortable being smushed between two male sirens, but I couldn't deny the gentle feeling of being held.
Luffy began humming a lullaby, similar to the song I heard when we first met. Law being jealous, also began humming a different tune. The two songs created a beautiful melody, that lulled me to sleep. Unaware that the two started fighting again to see who could sing the best lullaby.
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Claiming Waters
Fanfiction(reader) is a lover of the ocean, she has always dreamed of going with her father on his research vessel. Tragedy strikes when (reader) is separated from her father in a storm. Drifting in a lifeboat (reader) must survive in mysterious waters, unkno...