A/N: I'm not the best at fight scenes though so I'm looking for critique!
⚠️WARNING: cursing! (well- only once.) ⚠️
. 7:45 PM, IN A FOREST CLEARING .
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First POV:
I cursed beneath as a traveled through the trees, my assailant close behind. 'How did it end up like this?' I wondered, anxiety starting to spark in my heart like a match. I sped up my pace, jumping form branch to branch, but then I did something stupid.
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I tripped.
"FUCK!" I cringed, a sharp pain traveling up my leg from my ankle. Wobbling back up, I face my assailant ready for a fight. I watched as they reached for something in their back pocket, a wary feeling crawling up my back. 'There's no telling what it is! I need to make the first move!' I leapt into action, tackling the masked enemy down.
"WHO ARE YOU? WHO SENT YOU?!" I yelled.
The assailant said nothing, they only replied with a kick to my stomach. 'Urk!..' I hissed, holding my side. I distanced myself, watching their next move. However, they didn't move. 'Fine, I'll just make the next move then.' Dagger hidden, I charged at them with the intent to stab their shoulder.
"Got you." I whispered, stabbing the poisoned tip into their flesh, blood oozing into their clothing.
We started trading hits, and with each moment passing, the assailant's movements slowed and got sluggish. I took the opportunity to pin them down, smirking from above them. I knocked them out and tied them to a tree, running my fingers through my hair.
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Sounds of struggling awoke me from my nap.
"Don't even try, the poison in your blood won't clear for another day." I grumbled, staring at the assailant who was tied up and sweating bullets. I sat up right, pulling out the dried berries from my backpack.
"So, who sent you?" No answer.
I frowned, this was going to be a long day.
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A/N: Hello!! Hopefully this isn't too shabby for my first time writing a fighting scene! Critique on improving would be lovely!! 💕💕
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