Frost in the corner of my eye

Changing only a little......

Jack pov.
I turned around so fast it almost gave me a whiplash. it was Elsa, but It didn't look like her. her hair was black and so was her dress. her skin was like..like Pitchs.
"Wha-what's wrong with me Jack?" She was shaking. she was alive."what happened?" She put her hands out in front of her to look at herself. suddenly black sand swirled out of her hand and dashed toward me. I dodged it and took in a deep breath of air. I was holding my breath the whole time.
"Jack I'm sorry! I don't know what's wrong with me!" She clenched her fists then unclenched slowly. she looked me in the eyes with her pale blue ones. then they went black. I hate to say it but the only way to describe it is pitch black. she grinned. I tightened my grip on my staff. please don't do this Elsa. then her mouth opened.
Elsa pov.
I don't know what was wrong with me. then I felt a new energy of power go through my veins. I saw Jacks face. he was scared, upset. then I screamed.
"This is all your fault! If you never came in my life this would have never happened!" He was shocked.
"Let me help you" I didn't know why I was acting like this. this wasn't his fault. wait I missed two days of school. stop thinking about school! I shot black sand at him. he dodged it. shit he's good.
"I'm sorry I won't do it again" I walked up to him. why am I acting like a maniac?!? I looked him in the eyes and started crying. but I was faking. it's like I wanted to be like this. Pitch took away my good side and that leaves me with my bad side. wow. without my good side id be...evil! I then grabbed the staff that I guess was mine and shot him. he flew back. then Anna came in. that annoying bitch. wait no. yes. Anna gasped.
"Elsa I'm sorry I- What happened?"
"What happened is that I'm tired of being asked if I want to build a snowman" I then shot her. she fell back. Jack got up and put his hand out toward me and said,"you don't have to do this. we-we can help you. we can do this together"
"You can't help me Jack. I hate you. both of you. I hope you both suffer and die" he looked at me, his eyes pleasing me to trust him. no, I cant. the perfect girl is gone.
jack pov.
I shook away her words. I hate you. don't believe it Jack. this isn't her. she's just saying that to hurt you. then she walked up to me.
"I love you Elsa" she was inches from my face. then she kissed me. I separated from her after I felt a sharp pain flow through my body.
"Ugh" I rubbed my arms. they were stinging so bad.
"Jack?" Anna sat up brushing the black sand off her clothes. Elsa smiled.
"Ahh!!" I screamed. I was hurting everywhere. my skin grew darker.
"Like your hair" Elsa laughed in an evil way. I looked in the mirror beside me. it hurt so bad to move. no. my hair was black. my clothes were grey. my staff was black. then my eyes changed. I was evil. I looked at Elsa then at Anna. then I said something that I couldn't hold back.
"Anna your dead"

Wow. he's evil. not good language either. oh well. more is soon yet to come. sorry I haven't updated in a while. and sorry for spelling mistakes. Also I'm so excited that I got 306 reads. I thought I wouldn't even get 10. thank you!!!! Can't wait to update! By!!!
-hali💝💝💝