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ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨𝕖𝕣:PIANIST-

ℂ𝕠𝕧𝕖𝕣 - It's fine but the quotes is not very clear [8/10]

𝔹𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝕋𝕚𝕥𝕝𝕖 - It's simple and fit the story well  [9/10]

𝔹𝕝𝕦𝕣𝕓 - When you read it, it will makes you want to know more about it. But still you can make it simpler [7/10]

ℙ𝕝𝕠𝕥 - Some of the part are expected but it still make it a lot interesting [17/20]

ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝔻𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 - I must say the author really did a great job thumbsup [10/10]

𝔾𝕣𝕒𝕞𝕞𝕒𝕣 - I can't say it's perfect cuz maybe I missed some but so far I don't found any grammar mistake [18/20]

𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕥𝕪𝕝𝕖 - It's fine but you shouldn't add the jokes like 'Jungshook' or Taehyung's alien. Not everyone like that jokes [6/10]

𝕆𝕣𝕚𝕘𝕚𝕟𝕒𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 - To be honest, I never read anything like this like it's so cool and unique. The plot twist, and everything [10/10]

ℝ𝕖𝕒𝕕𝕖𝕣'𝕤 𝔼𝕟𝕛𝕠𝕪𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 - I really enjoyed it except for the jokes but other from that is fine [4.5/5]

𝕋𝕠𝕥𝕒𝕝 : 89.5

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