X men rise of the dragon

Fire

Hey guys I know I haven't had a note yet and this is my first story so ya tell me what you think cuse I've love to hear pluse I need some advice on the writing tell me if ya like it :) p.s there's a picture of her so ya se uya see ya :)

-------EMILYS P.O.V-----------
"Ow ow ow ow owwww man that hurt" I said getting up as the blackness faded away "shit" i said looking at my wings they were torn in a couple of places nothing toooo serious but flying was out of the question and my bag had Ben Burned to sherds "grate just great look at that my jackets burned too" I said taking in of and putting it on the ground behind the smoldering building . well no sense in hiding now I said as I took out my tail and brushed of my horns . Man i REALLY need water my thoughts on fires I thought suddenly I started coughing and boom flames !" I made flames........ from my mouth" !!!! I scweeled loudly "awesome"!!!! That was almost as cool as my wings well .....almost I thought. *CRACK* I spun around to see a boy standing there almost ten probably by the looks of him. He had curly red hair,green eyes and a face full of freckles."Um high" I waved to him "what's your name" he looked at me with his eyes filled with terror and screamed "MOOOOOOOOM HEEEELLLLPP MMEEEE"and dashed away as fast as his tiny legs could carry him."Dammit" he was cute, I hope he finds his mom and I didn't scare him to bad. Ive always had a soft spot for little kids. Their just so cute when there little and I have no problems with humans they can't do any thing to me any way and frankly I don't know who the government men are the could easily
Be mutants or men so I don't hold any preferences between the two. I'm wierd like that I know most humans hate mutants and most mutants hate humans but hey in the end were all the same deep down smelly and pink. I couldn't help laughing at that one not that I had said it out loud..... I hope somtimes that just happens to me o well .