CURRENTLY MAJORLY EDITING. CHAPTERS MAY NOT MAKE SENSE.
"Fine." i say as i inch closer to him.
"Fine." he says as he does the same.
"Fine." i say under my breath but loud enough to be heard as he gently places a hand on my lower back, putting just...
welcome to the worst, maybe not that bad, first, horrible disgusting, amazingly beautiful book you'll ever read.
i came up with this on a whim and i really hope you enjoy it. it is my first book so lets not turn to hate on it so quickly. i will try and upload as much as possible but as a student it will be hard to set a actual schedule. but thank you for taking a chance.
with that said here are some ground rules and notes 🤠
i hate to be that bitch but you really just can't trust no one these days:
1) IF you steal my book i will not hesitate to take legal action. it is my book i came up with in my own head in my English class, let's not plagiarise. with that said any connections with this book and your specific life are purely coincidences. (consider yourself cool)
2) if this book miraculously does well and it has re-readers (rr's) PLEASE don't spoil as your comment will be deleted. give the first time readers (ftr's) the experience you got! ofc you can still comment, add some fun jokes but nothing ruining the experience <33
3) no hate please! i don't understand why not liking something and just scrolling or leaving it WITHOUT leaving hate isn't normalized lmao. this is a big reason why social media is so toxic. ew. sorry i got political there. dat shit nasty.
4) this book does contain mature subject matter and language. viewer discretion is advised!!!
5) yes. there is smut. not a rule but i know ur wondering ;)
6) this is my first ever book. like. ever. there's been other "beginners" here and there but this is the first one i planned and wanted to finish. im a highschool student man im a fucking child, so please. PLEASE. take it easy. don't be a bitch. got something wrong with my story? leave, didn't ask you to be here. but i LOVE constructive criticism! bring it my way in a positive manner. EW THAT WAS SERIOUS GROSS IM SORRY ILY.
but still. take that seriously.
:)
7) if there is any confusion on the pronouns she/they or he/they... ( using she/her or he/him and they/them pronouns together) here are some examples:
she/they:
"I was talking with lilia earlier and she said that she found the cutest sweater at the mall and that they wanted to go and buy it but she looked in her wallet and realized that they had no money with them so she couldn't."
he/they:
"Mark said he was annoyed with Lisa, he was even breathing all heavy and their eyes were all red and they even smashed the wall. I hope he is ok, i'll go check on him after."
i get it can be a bit confusing but if we've normalized she/her and he/him pronouns why ignore all the valid people with these ones. i won't try to use them interchangeably to make it easier but i hope this helped!
things to note:
- marcel ~ 17, rosa ~ 18, ice ~ 17, alex ~ 18, maria ~ 15 (turning 16)
i'll try to post as frequently as possible, i wanted to finish the whole book before i post but right now that's not looking possible, at LEAST once a week ❤️
and with that, here are the character aesthetics <3:
marcel ruiz (he/him):
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rosilita -"rosie"- lore (she/her):
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maria ruiz (she/her):
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isaiah "ice" ndaku (he/they) :
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alex corella (she/they):
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