Name: Creamcloud
Nice never seen cream very often
RFN: has a creamy tan pelt, with white markings that look like clouds
makes sense
Rank: Warrior
actually i have nothing to say on this
Clan: Streamclan
Good i have a oc clan called streamclan too
Gender: she-cat
am a girl and make she-cat so make sense to me
Sexuality: Bisexual
ok
Likes: salmon, kits, curious apprentices
salmon...?I like how she likes curious apprentices
Dislikes: nosy cats, rain, doing apprentice duties as a warrior
makes sense pretty basic stuff
Appearance: has a creamy tan pelt with white markings. She has a white underbelly and white paws. Her eyes are piercing blue.
I like that she has cream fur so far you have a good oc
Personality: Creamcloud can be very protective of her kits, because she lost her first litter due to the cold and hunger. She can be a bit short tempered and impulsive when making decisions. Sometimes her mistakes have cost lives. Lastly, she can be very compassionate towards younger generations because of her own experiences.
Well balanced you did good
Family: (Mother) Honeyshade; A light grey she-cat with tan stripes(Father) Yellowwhisker; A black tom with yellow eyes, he has a long tail(Sister) Shadefoot; - A pale grey she-cat with tan stripes, she has tufty ears(Brother) Salmonclaw; - A russet brown tom with green eyes, he takes after his grandmotherNot entirely right with genetics but i like it.Yellowwhisker has double w but i will go with and Salmonclaw when she liked salmon is kind of cool.Kits:First Litter; (She-cat)Palekit - pale tan kit with white spots; blue eyes(Tom)Pinekit - russet brown tom with a white underbelly; amber eyesSecond Litter; (Tom)Sandpounce - white tom with creamy splotches, has green eyes(Tom)Aspenclaw - black tom with pine colored markings; green eyes(She-cat)Honeyrose - light grey with darker grey splotches that look like petals, she has hazel colored eyes; is named after Creamcloud's motherThird litter: (She-cat) Troutwhisker - light brown with a white foot; has amber eyesApprentice: Spottedpaw - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.
So a lot of fish.But Sandpounce and Honeyrose are unique names and Palekit and Pinekit are good too.Did spottedpaw get a warrior name?
Backstory: Creamkit has 3 littermates, but unfortunately, one of her brothers was a stillborn. At 4 moons old, her father killed Honeyshade, and was found a traitor. She and her littermates were treated unfairly for their father's decisions. They had no kin to support them. As a kit Creamcloud always wanted to be a medicine cat, but the lack of her clan's trust didn't allow her to follow her dream. When Creamcloud was apprenticed, her mentor, Redclaw, wasn't any better. He focused on battle training so much that Creamcloud barely knew how to hunt. Redclaw and his mate were found to be allying with Yellowwhisker, and they were banished. Creamcloud was apprenticed to Acornwhisker, a kinder tom. Creamcloud failed her assessment due to her lack of hunting skills. She had to stay behind as her littermates became warriors. She trained harder, and finally passed. She became mates with Wrenflight, and they had kits together. Both her kits dies because of the cold and hunger. Both mates weren't ready to have another litter of kits. Creamcloud was given an apprentice named Spottedpaw, her lively attitude persuaded Creamcloud to have another litter. After she was done training her apprentice, they had a litter of 3. All of them survive to become loyal warriors. She had one more litter of 2 kits, and both survived. One became a medicine cat, per Creamcloud's dream, and the other became a warrior. Creamcloud's brother becomes deputy when their current deputy dies in battle. Creamcloud continues to be a warrior of Streamclan, who is fierce in defending borders and protecting kits.
Never seen a cat who failed her assessment so that is pretty unique.Still born thing is over used but fine.So i have not seen a cat who wanted to be a med cat and could not.I think the clan didn't like them because the father was a traitor thing is over used.
So pretty good.I would like the see Spottedpaw's warrior name and maybe make her mother evil instead but i like the character.You did great on you oc!
