HOOKING. Love this. It's quirky, it's different and it just does its job. My only comment would be maybe to put the different questions on different lines to make them pop out a little more on the page. But seriously? I love it.
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Wow. This is very hooking. It's heart breaking. The word choices are so simple yet so effective. My only critique is the "so I guess there is that" line, I was thinking that could be changed ever so slightly, something like "he gave me bad dreams too which is why i didnt like falling asleep" or even add it to the info about the monster not waking her up? It might just flow ever so slightly better. But this is such an intriguing and haunting blurb. Well done.
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Amazing and unique blurb. Honestly, this is one of rare blurbs which makes one want to read the book. Although, it could have been represented in a better way.
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