Guys! Here are the results for the Best Female Lead, judged by MiniMoxx & ivashkov20 . Trust me, it wasn't an easy job to pick top 3 from the entries submitted because all of them were AMAZING!
REVIEW: Your writing is beautiful. A student would instantly connect with your character, since everyone faces the same issues. It was interesting to read about her, but the plot was too slow to completely understand her.
REVIEW: A sci-fi fan would be amazed with your character. She was just like one of those heroines, challenging each and everything. Your writing was different, making it interesting to read. But I didn't reach to that point, that I could completely justify her character.
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Review: The chapter was quite well written. The cliffhanger was amazing, and even with a huge amount of characters, I didn't get confused. However, there were a lot of grammatical mistakes and errors. Do work on it.
REVIEW: Raia seems to be a strong female lead, she's very smart and strong, which is nice to see.I noticed some tense changes in the narrative as an aside. Raia's maturity really comes across in the narrative and i like it a lot. She feels like she's a driven character and in a book like this, that's something that's needed. Well done, she feels really rounded.
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3rd
Valerie Wilson in Stubbornly Falling in Love by nicoleshermann
SCORE: 7.5/10
REVIEW : Valerie seems like a strong female lead. She knows what's best for her even if it hurts, and acts on it. She cares about her friends and helps when in trouble. My only real critique on her on what i read is that she doesn't present many flaws, which I'd like to see to make her more realistic. But I'm sure they are there. She isn't weak and doesnt rely on others. Her dialogue seems strong as well. Well done!
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Diya Malhotra in The road not taken by
SCORE: 7.5/10
REVIEW: To be honest, you lost your marks because of your grammar, and dialogues. I could instantly connect with your character. However, she was...flawless. The three chapters I read, there wasn't a single flaw. She was strong, all-rounded student which made her unrealistic.
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