Karwachauth 2019 os

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So this is suggested by Riyamehta_24    i hope you like it and thank you for suggestion.

Scene starts from when preeta and shristy come at luthra house in dancer dress with veil so no one can identify them.

Shristy: dii aap tension mt lo apka vrat karan sir ke haatho se hi khulega.

Preeta:hmm

Preeta is seeing karan with teary eyes while karan is talking to sammy.

Then karan felt gaze so he turn towards preeta to see her but she moved from there.

Preeta went to mahesh uncle room.

Preeta: mahesh uncle aap uth jaie na kab se mai wait kar rahi hu apka ki kab aap uthenge aur mai sari sachai sabko bata dege aap jaldi uth jaie ga aur apko pata hai meri aur karan ki shadi bhi ho chuki hai pr vo muje apni patni nhi manta aur vo sherlyn aur uska boyfriend vo luthra parivaar ko barbaad krne pe tuli hui hai plz aap uth jaie...

She heard footsteps noise so she take blessings of him and went out.

Now it was the time for dance...

All were dancing but karan is seeing preeta but to him she is unknown dancer.

Karan (in mind): muje esa kyu lag raha hai ki ye jo dancer hai vo preeta hai. Pr vo yaha kyu aayegi kahi usne mere liye vrat ... Nhi nhi vo kyu rakhegi maine to uski zindagi barbaad kardi pr fir bhi muje uski presence feel ho rahi hai.

He again started staring preeta now preeta started feeling dizzy because of fast..

Suddenly she fall down.. karan was standing near her so he went and put her head in his lap.

Karan: girish paani lana plz

Girish:yes sir

Girish went and bought water. He was about to drink her but dadi stop her.

Dadi: puttar aaj usne vrat rakha hoga apne pati ke liye isiliye tu isse pani mat pila.

Karan: dadi kya baat kr rahe inki tabiyaat thik nhi hai aur apko vrat ki padi hai.

Dadi: pr puttar

Rishabh: karan tu pila de pani unki tabiyat karab hai.

Karan: hmmm

He was about to drink water she started breathing heavily because of suffocation and she fell unconscious..

Rishabh: karan tu unka ye dupatta hata de unko suffocation ho rahi hai aur shayad vo behosh bhi ho gayi hai.

Karan removed the veil and all were shocked but karan hell shocked except sammy.

Karan(whisper): preeta

Rishabh:preeta ji

Kareena: ye middle class ladki yaha kya kar rahi hai. Jarur hamara function kharab karne ayi hogi.

Karan: stop it bua

Karan sprinkle water on her face but she was not getting conscious..

Karan: rishabh tu doctor ko call kr mai preeta kon upar le jata hu.

He took to his room and lay her down on bed. Karan is sitting beside her and caressing her hair.

Karan(teary eyes): preeta kyu ayi thi yaha kahi mere liye vrat rakha ho aur iske liye ayi hoo..

Suddenly doctor came with rishabh kritika and sammy.

Karan: doctor aap check kiyije na yeh behosh ho gayi hai.

Doctor: sure.

Karan is sitting beside her while kritika take sammy and rishabh outside the room.

Kritika: rishabh bhai kahi preeta ne karan bhai ke lite vrat to bhi rakha na.

Sammy: ha vrat rakha hai isiliye vo yaha ayi hai.

Rishabh:tuje kaise pata ki preeta ji ne vrat rakha hai.

Sammy : are mai hi leke aya hu unko yaha (he realized and bite his tongue)
Sorry bhai.

Rishabh and kritika both hug him and said well done.

They went inside the room.

Rishabh: doctor kya hua hai preeta ji ko.

Doctor:inhone kuch khaya nhi hai subah se isiliye aur jyada stress ki vajah se bass ye behosh ho gyi thi. Aap please inke husband se kahiye inka dhyaan rakhe nhi to she will be in depression.. that's it abb mai chalta hu par aap inhe hosh ane kai baad kuch khila dijiye ga .

Karan:ok

All left with doctor now only preeran are in room.

Karan: abb mai tumhe apni wife accept karke jo bhi bate hai vo sab bhula kai firse ek nayi shuruwat karenge.

He kissed her forehead. By this preeta woke up.

Preeta: karan (weakly)

Karan: ha babydoll

Preeta: mai yaha kaise

Karan: vo tum behosh ho gayi thi isiliye mai yaha leke aya chalo ye sab chodo aur kuch khalo.

Preeta:nhi muje kuch nhi khana.

Karan: vrat rakha na tumne (preeta shockingly see him) ese mat dekho muje pata hai tumne vrat rakha hai to chalo pehle vrat todlo apna.

Preeta: hmm

Karan: preeta ek aur baat mai sari purani baate bhulakar ek nayi shuruwat karna chahta hu aur tumhe apni wife accept karta.

Preeta(teary eyes): muje esa keh kar chod to nhi doge na jaise shadi wali raat choda tha.

Karan: nhi chodunga vada hai mera.chalo ab apna vrat khol do.

Both went to terrace and preeta open her vrat. Then all family drama happend and finally all accept preeta as their daughter in law.

Both went to their room and went to balcony. Both were admiring weather and hug each other.

Both joined their forehead

Preeran(whisper): i love you.
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