(Please give me feedback as this is my first story)
WARNING-MATURE CONTENT(no sex yet ha)
"Your nape is min-" Eld's words were cut off as suddenly the female titan turned its head and devoured Eld's upper body. The sickening crunch of his body against the female titan's teeth rang across the forest.
"ELD!" Petra, shocked by the female titan's come back, lowered herself closer to the ground. "How? It can't possibly see already! It hasn't even been thirty seconds..." She saw the one eye on the female titan's face. It bulged out, as if it weren't her own. "Just one eye? It prioritized one eye to heal faster?"
Right then, the female titan started to (naruto) run towards her. Petra, still shocked from Eld's death, did nothing to get higher and dodge the attack. "Petra! Right yourself already!"Oruo's words were meaningless now. The female titan was almost on top of Petra.
"Petra hurry up!"
It was too late.
The female titan raised her foot and brought it down on Petra. Blood spurted every where as it connected. Eren thought he could still hear her scream of pure terror before being killed.
Oruo hardened his face in concentration and grappled directly above the female titan, going for its nape. "Hey... DIE!" He yelled as he brought his blade down on the nape.
CLANG!
The blades split apart and broke from the hardened material on the female titan's nape. "Wha-" Oruo's words were cut off by the kick from the female titan that connected with his body.
The trees were now painted with the blood of squad Levi. Eren, in a complete rage, bites his hand and transforms. "I'll, I'll kill it!"
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A few minutes earlier
Yellow light flashed around the trees near Captain Levi. The female titan? He turned around and headed in the direction of the strike of lighting.
Present
Levi scanned the area as he saw the corpses of the other members of Levi squad. For some unknown reason, he had been hoping for Petra to be alive. His eyes rested on the beautiful woman with ginger hair and amber eyes. Why am I thinking like this? Her body was pressed against a tree, her head facing up. Levi walked closer and for some reason, felt for her pulse. Why am I doing this? She should be dead. Was it fear of letting go? Or was it...(add the word)
He still remembered her first day as a member of Levi squad. She had cut her nails short and straightened her hair as well to impress Captain Levi. She had a secret crush on him since she saw him in the survey corps. Levi still remembered her first day, how cheerful she was and how much she wanted to impress him.
All of that was shattered now.
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So what did you guys think? Am I a good writer or the worst one? Should I continue this?
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The Letter
FanfictionWhat if Petra survived the female titan's kick but severely wounded? What if she had true feelings for Levi and wrote a letter to Levi about it?(well imo I believe she did have feelings for him) Sorry for disappointing you guys for not writing aruan...