chapter 1

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No one's pov

Good job Megumi. A mom with red hair said to her yellow haired son throwing shuriken.
Thanks mom, but look at dad and Amakami.
they are already doing Jutsu. The yellow haired boy now known as Megumi said, looking at his black haired sister and yellow black and blue haired father.

A perfect family training together you would say, but there is one person missing the eldest son who is sitting in his room playing with a kunai he pulled out of his leg after one of his beatings by the villagers.
That son being Naruto Uzumaki Namekaze.

He went downstairs to go out in the village to visit his gramps aka the third hokage.

Minato: Where are you going demon.
Naruto: to visit the third hokage.
Kushina: Damn brat, just be home before 8.
Naruto: Yes mom.

In the village

RV1: where are you going to hide you damn demon.
RV2: Yeah we got you now.

The mob of villagers start to beat Naruto up.
but before naruto passes out he hears and sees one thing.
Anbu1: Fire style: great fireball jutsu
Anbu2: Wind style: Great breaktrough
And both of the Anbu have one glowing red eye, one in his left eye the other one in his right eye.

When Naruto wakes up

He wakes up in a sewer.
Naruto: Are you kidding me, did they really just throw me in a sewer.

??: BRAT SHUT UP IM TRYING TO SLEEP!!
Naruto: Holy mother of ramen. Who are you big fox man.
??: I am the mighty nine tailed shadow fox you brat.
Naruto: Wow, Whats your name furrball of might.
Nine tails: "I have a feeling he's different"
Why would i tell you my name. (Naruto has 25% of the ying and 25% of the yang chakra)
Naruto: *starts to cry* Because i want a friend.

Nine tails: "he is different" My name is Kurama, but you have to ask some one  to train you i cant have a weak jinchuriki.
Naruto: Why cant you just train me?
Kurama: because i dont know how to teach chakra control.
Naruto: *starts to fade* Bye i guess.
Kurama: bye kit.

When really Naruto wakes up

??: I am slowly losing my respect for Minato sensei.
?: You still have some respect?! I lost mine the moment he started to neglect Naruto.
???: I know Obito and Kakashi but right now we need to make sure he heals.
Obito and Kakashi: Yes lord third.
Hiruzen: the only one that wants to heal Naruto is on her way, Naruto is lucky Tsunade likes him (not that way ya pervs).

Obito: She sure was mad when she found out Naruto was being neglected, because Jiraiya told Minato and Kushina, that he thought Megumi and Amakami were the children of prophecy.
Kakashi: I never want to see her that mad again.

Naruto: Where am i.(Btw he's 8 so he was just enrolled in the academy)
Hiruzen: Your in my house Naruto-kun.
Naruto: GRAMPS!! *hugs Hiruzen* Can you train me please.
Hiruzen: I'm sorry but i cant, however maybe  Kakashi and Obito can.

Naruto: Will you, please? *puppy eyes jutsu*
Obito: of course we can meet us tomorrow at training ground 44.
Kakashi: Obito did Madara make you crazy?
Obito: No. Its smart think Kakashi think. There will be no one who will interupt us there except maybe Anko.

Kakashi: Yeah your right, and i wouldn't mind running into Anko.
Naruto: So you will train me?
Kakashi:  yes we will.
Obito: See you tomorrow at the gates of training ground 44.
Naruto: see you tomorrow.

Naruto sneaks into his room, and sneaks out the next day to train with Obito and Kakashi.

at the gates of training ground 44(aka forest of death)

Kakashi, Obito, there are you. And who are you. Naruto asks while pointing at a pale man with weird purple markings under his eyes.
I am Orochimaru. I am here to help you train. The pale man said while they were walking into the forest of death

Naruto: Can we train in chakra control first?
Kakashi: We are but why did you ask.
Obito: Yes i'm curious as well.
Naruto: Because if i have decent chakra control Kurama will help me train.
Orochimaru: Naruto-kun, who is Kurama?

Naruto: Oh yeah. He's a big fox with fur like my hair.
Kakashi: Wait you talked with the fox?
Naruto: Yes he said he would train me if i had some chakra control because he said he had no idea on how to teach that.
Kurama: Kit let me talk with them.
Naruto: "How do i do that?"
Kurama: Just say touch my shoulder or something.

Naruto: Guys can you touch my shoulder.
Obito: I dont know why but okay.
All of them do touch his shoulder, and wake up in Naruto's mindscape.

Obito: Oh shit a big fox. *hides behind Naruto *
Kakashi: Stop acting like a kid and lets hear what he has to say.
Kurama: Naruto was right i want to train him.
Orochimaru: Why would we believe you?
Kurama: because i am have 25% ying and 25% yang chakra. So i have half of the chakra but i have a part of both the good and the bad part of the chakra, but i cant prove it so there isn't really a way for you to trust me completly.

Obito: If Naruto trusts you then so do we.


End of the chapter
sayonara.

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