Melted rewrite

Chapter 6

Back at Anna's palace she was pacing distraught. She talked to herself.

"Get it together. Control it. Don't feel. Don't feel. Don't FEEL!" she said.

The she heard fire cause her mettle to melt and stopped. She looked around. She's left a sharp wake of fire waves behind her on the floor. They grew up the wall, taking over the castle.

At the Northern Lights were bright and Olaf stared at them in awe as he rode on Sven's back.

"Look, Sven. The sky's awake." Olaf said.

Behind Olaf and Sven, Anna walked with Kristoff while she started sweating.

"Are you hot?" Kristoff asked.

"A little." she said.

He reaches like he might put an arm around her, but decides against it. He looked around as if he didsn't know what to do, then got a thought.

"Wait. Come here." he said and took her hand and pulled her around a bend into a rock- lined pass. Ice powered by the darkness, dot the path. He held her hands over one of them.

"Oooh... That's nice." she said.

They continued on the path, walking from vent to vent.

"So, about my friends...well, I say friends, they're more like family... Anyway, when I was a kid, it was just me and Sven...until they took me in." Kristoff said taking a deep breath.

"They did?" she said while she moved.

"I don't want to scare you, they can be a little bit inappropriate...and loud...very loud...they're also stubborn at times, and a little overbearing. And heavy. Really, really heavy. But they're fine.. You'll get it. They mean well." he said nervous ramble.

Elsa touched Kristoff's arm, reassuringly.

"Kristoff, they sound wonderful." she said.

He smiles, appreciating her sincerity.

"Okay then..." he said.

Mustering the courage, he stepped forward and with a wave of the arms announced-

" Meet my family." he said surrounded by rocks.

"Hey, guys!" he said as he and Sven moved through the rocks, waving and greeting,.

Olaf and Elsa stood frozen, dumbfounded.

"They're rocks." Elsa said to herself.

"He's crazy. I'll distract them while you run." Olaf said. "Hi, Sven's family! It's nice to meet you!" he continued loudly then quietly to Elsa. "Elsa, because I love you, I insist you run."

"I understand you're love experts!" he continued to Elsa. "Why aren't you running?"

She snapped out of her shock and started backing away.

"Okay. Um...I'm gonna go-" she said.

Just then the rocks around her started rolling.

"Kristoff!" she continue panicking.

Olaf lit up and chased the rocks, who surround Kristoff and unfold as trolls.

"KRISTOFF'S HOME!" Bulda said.

"Kristoff! Kristoff's home! It's been too long! Kristoff's home!" the other trolls said various.

Olaf jumped around all excitedly.

"Kristoff's home." Olaf said excitedly then he stopped, confused, and looks to one of the trolls.

" Wait? Kristoff?" he said confused.