Melted rewrite

Chapter 2

It had been three years and was now the day of Anna's coronation.

Ships were being pulled up to the docks and guests pile out.

"Welcome to Arendelle!"

A boy tried to get away as his mother tries to stuff him in his bund ad jacket.

"Why do I have to wear this?"

"Because the Queen has come of age. It's Coronation Day!"

"That's not my fault."

They pass the May Pole being raised and a Sami ice harvester chatting with his reindeer. We recognize them as Kristoff and Sven, all grown up. Sven hops around excitedly like a dog and nuzzles Kristoff's chest.

"What do you want, Sven?" Kristoff said leaning in then spoke for Sven, as if he can.

"Give me a snack." he said for him.

"What's the magic word?"

"Please! Kristoff pulls a carrot out of his shirt pocket and hands it to Sven. Sven tries to bite the whole thing.

"Hey, hey, hey! Share!"

Then Sven took a smaller bite.

Then Kristoff has a bite himself, not seeming to care that it's covered in reindeer slobber.

"I can't believe they're finally opening up the gates!" Lee Persi said.

"And for a whole day! Faster, Persi!" Aggie said.

They passed a tiny but menacing duke, who wears taps on his shoes to "enhance" his presence. Then two guards follow close behind him.

"Ah, Arendelle, our most mysterious trade partner. Open those gates so I may unlock your secrets and exploit your riches. Did I just say that out loud?" the duke said.

We leave him and head down the bridge towards the castle gates, passing an Irishman and a Spanish Dignitary.

"Oh, me sore eyes can't wait to see the Queen and the Princess. I bet they're absolutely lovely." An Irish man said.

"I bet they are beautiful. We move past them, to a particular castle window." a spanish man said.

In the castle eighteen year old Elsa was in her room snoring and drooling. Then there was a knock.

"Princess Elsa...?" Kai said.

She sat up with her hair all over the place. She then coughed, snorted and pulled her hair from her mouth.

"...Huh? Yeah?" she said.

"Sorry to wake you, ma'am but—"

"No, you didn't. I've been up for hours." she said and started falling back asleep while sitting. She snored but then was startling her awake.

"Who is it?"

"It's still me, ma'am. Time to get ready."

"Ready for what?"

"Your sister's coronation, ma'am.

"My sister's cor-neration..."

Then her eye opened enough to catch sight of her coronation dress.

She bolted, wide awake in excitement.

"Coronation Day! Ha ha!"

Then she remembered what it meant would happen today.

Elsa stood in room, wearing her coronation dress. She finishes pinning ribbons in her hair.

Elsa and Olaf were outside the hustle and bustle of preparations.