Hi guys! This is my first story ive written that im actually publishing somewhere. I would love it if you guys gave me some constructive criticism on how i could make it better.
This actually started off as a short story i needed to write for my english class. Since then, I have added in more detail and extra scenes.
fun fact: i actually made the cover for this. I was going to draw a ballroom but i couldnt figure out how to do that (and i was procrastinating english work. Dont worry i finished it in jesus class today. Yes, i go to a catholic school) so i came up with that cover.
If anyone wants to know a little bit about me... Hi! I'm ashleigh. Im a freshman in high school (i'll be a sophomore soon though). I live in florida with my parents, my brother, my cat, and my dog. I'm a competetive gymnast currently training level 7 and a competitive rock climber. Im asexual and still figuring out my romantic orientation, but am most likely biromantic. Some of the fandoms im in are: marvel, harry potter (mostly marauders and i dont support jkr), miraculous ladybug, shadowhunters (novels not tv show), and many more that i cant remember off the top of my head.
I hope you all enjoy this and thexcaretaker and edgeofglobe this is for you because you told me to publish this somewhere, so here we are. Molly, i used your name suggestion for the river in the first chapter. Youre welcome. Also, GRACIE IF YOURE SEEING THIS NO YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO READ THE CHAPTERS BEFORE I PUBLISH THEM :) <3
The actual story will have better grammar than this, so dont be worried. I made sure to check over it and capitalize all the "i"s and put apostrophes in all the contractions.
I'll try to update the story as much as i can, it will probably be about every one or two weeks, depending on what i have goin on in my week and if i get distracted on tiktok or not (if you want to follow me my main is ashleighparilla and me and my bestie's book one is book.worms.ash.y.soph . I post more on the book one) i might post updates about this story to the book one, or i might not, i havent decoded yet (no promises).
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If I Loved You, Why Would I Kill You?
FantasyA teen named Eleanor has the job of an assassin and the power of teleportation. Her boss sends her to kill one of her targets, but she ends up falling in love with her.