Fallen Sinners

Chapter 1 Remake

There she is. The love of my life. The perfect girl for me. The only person that I have ever loved.
A loud ring makes me lose thought. I Look down towards the sound and see a female police officer. She had a tight ponytail and a dark blue jacket with yellow print that reads "POLICE".
"My name is Miley Curtis I work for the police... what is your name?."
"Its Max... Max Stone."
My throat started to hurt from the yelling. This building is really high...
"Why are you doing this... why dont you tell me what's wrong?"
"I-."
"Just tell me."
"I dont need to live... anymore."
"Everyone needs to live.
"I have no reason to live."
"What about family or friends. Your so young you dont want your life to end this way... do you have a girlfriend?."
"No.... at least not anymore..."
I put my hands up to my eyes to stop myself from crying. Suddenly tears caught their way out of my eyes. I tried my best to wipe them away before they could come out but couldn't control them.
The police officer pulled out her phone and said something that I could not hear. One of the police officers went into the crowd of students.
They were just trying to go school but I stopped any chance of that. I bet they will let everyone out of school to grieve. Who will grieve for me.
The only person who has the chance of actually doing so is busy laughing their ass off in the corner because their best friend is about to commit suicide.
It's not his fault but it still pisses me off. If he was his other self right now I bet he would crying just as much as I am. Its funny he has a 50/50 chance of either crying or laughing at his best friends death.
"What did you do?"
"I messed everything up... I ruined my one chance with a life with her."
I kept sneaking peeks at her in the crowd.
"I'm sure whatever you did wasn't too bad. You probably still have a chance."
I doubt it... she told me how she felt about me. And that she loved him more than me. That he was a better boyfriend then I could ever be. That he is the best and I... am the worst. She hates me for what I've done.
"Is she here in the crowd?"
"No..."
It's better I dont talk to her... I don't want her to think worse of me. I dont want to hear how much she hates me...
She walks out of the crowd over to the police officer and grabs the mic from her.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes..."
"Am I not the one your talking about."
"No... there was someone else."
"Really?"
"Yeah."
"Well did you kill her boyfriend too?"
"I didn't..."
"You didn't do what!?"
"I didn't kill him... he was my friend."
"Then why would you do it?"
"I didn't do it!"
"Then where is he!"
"I dont know!"
I started to cry
"Max! Where the fuck is Kyle!"
"He was trying to take you away from me!"
"He had nothing to do with it. I broke up with you of my own free will!"
"No! I Ioved you! And you loved me! We were perfect!"
"You were only a dumb rebound! Just when he changed you ruined it! He changed! He changed because he loved me! We could have been something..."
"We were in love!"
"I hate you!"
"I love you so much!"
She practically threw the mic at a police officer. I looked around and noticed that the police officer I was speaking to before was gone. The roof doors slams open and I turn around.
The police officer comes rushing towards me before I have a chance to jump she tackles me to the ground.
"You are under arrest for the murder of Kyle Smith."
She put handcuffs on me with my hands behind my back. They were really tight and were hurting my wrist. I just want to die...
I start to bash my head on the ledge of the rooftop.
She pulled me up from off the ground and as blood dripped down my face.
I kick her in the leg and she lets go. Finally I can die. I sprint off the ledge of the roof diving onto my stomach.
I was always told that before you die your life flashes before your eyes. I felt as if I was falling down in slow motion and all my bad memories came to mind.
I looked over the town I've lived in my whole life one last time and noticed something was coming towards me. I couldn't see because of how bright the sun was.
I winced my eyes to get a better view and realized what it was. An airplane was coming towards the school until a sudden dip and it started to nose dive downwards. It crashed over in front of the school gate. There was a small explosion. Then suddenly there was a huge explosion.
The force pushed me back through one of the classroom windows and I smashed into a wall. All of the air in my lungs vanished and everything started to fade. The edges of my field of view were darkening and it was hard to focus on anything.

A/N: yeah so the old one was garbage so this is better ig.