|| The elder prince of Hell, Kim Taehyung, is revealed as the next heir of the throne just a few days after his father's death. Amongst the countless responsibilities on his shoulder and a repeated nightmare, Taehyung finds himself waiting for the n...
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TOTAL MARKS ( 98/100 )
1. COVER ( 5/5 )
I just love the cover, he/she did a great job with it. It does match with the plot and it's fancy as well. I liked it.
2. TITLE ( 4/5 )
The title of the story is not probably the best title but he/she has done a great job with the title. The title gives me the feeling of dictatorship and vampires that's a good thing.
Marks reduction issue:- Well the story is still not complete so I can't judge the other contents so easily. ' WHAMMY ' means a powerful event with some unpleasant effects or an evil or unlucky influence; influencer. I didn't find some of that many events which will convey the meaning to the Title. But I can be wrong since it's still not completed yet.
3. DESCRIPTION ( 5/5 )
He/She wrote a quite satisfying description. It will attract more and more readers. The description was enough to attract audience who love thriller and romance in the same plot.
4. OPENING ( 10/10 )
The opening was great! I loved it. It seems rare to see these kind of openings in a wattpad story. After a long time, I got an opportunity to read a story like this. It gave me a drama like feeling and when readers get that feeling they will support you till the end of the story and even after that, unless there are some irksome situations in the story.
5. PLOT ( 10 /10 )
I liked the plot since the beginning. It was well written. Well the Jeonovia thingy made me remember Princess Diaries where the main actress id the Princess and soon to be Queen of Genovia.
6.GRAMMER ( 15 /15 )
Grammer is something which enhances the plot of the story. Good grammer is always important to write good stories. I really like your grammer skills.
7. INCIDENTS ( 10 / 10 )
Well the incidents are quite good but since I don't read much fantasy genre books so probably for me they are kinda little dramatic but it's great. I took some advice from a fantasy genre lover-writer and she said it was well written.
8. DIALOGUES ( 10 /10 )
The dialogues are quite good... Its so well written that I can feel the emotions in the scene. ( I normally have some difficulties in doing that )
