The beta, my mate

Chapter 1

Finally after tracking all day we get to go home, we've been tracking rogues that keep showing up on our land all day, God I was tired of this shit I need food and my mate oh wait I'm mate less, how was that even possible I must be cursed I'm so damn old, ok I'm only 30 but still I should have found her along time ago. " Ethan, come here" my Alpha said sternly, "yes alpha?" I saw him roll his eyes " Ethan the rest of the pack is behind us, and we've grown up together"
"Fine Ian happy?" Punching him I'm the arm,"Dude you maybe my beta, but don't punch me unless you wanna die, Ethan hello? What's wrong ?"
I stood there feeling a pull as if I was being drawn to something. " I don't know I have this feeling about something, I don't know what it is but I have to find it." We began to make our way to the pull I was being drawn to.

After walking for awhile we came to a small lake, the water was so clear, you could have seen yourself in it, looking around I noticed a small figure laying in the water, as I got closer I noticed the figure was naked, It looked like it got a beating. the body was covered in cuts and bruises. I turned the body over to see who it was , my body stiffened. "Ethan who is it?" I heard Ian behind me. "she's my mate and barely alive". I picked her up her petite little body lifeless, her dirt blonde hair was covered in blood, walking back toward the rest of the pack a few of the men began to make comments on how they'd love to get a piece of that body. "Mine! And if anyone touches her I'll kill you!" I growled at them. I finally found you, don't you give up on me.

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