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-Clothes Shopping-"What about this one?" Shelby asks.
"You can see my butt- I mean ass in that!" I correct myself.
"Don't you think that the point?" She asks.
"No. The point is to be bad not slutty." I say.
"But slutty is bad."
"Bad's not all slutty."
"Fine. Suit your self. But I'm going for the slutty look." She says.
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-Hair-
"Tori! Dye it blonde!" Ashley says."I also want to cut it." I say.
"Okay. Get the dye." She says.
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-First Appearance-
"Ash, I'm scared. What if they laugh?" Is say panicked."T, you look hot. They won't laugh." She says with Selina and Shelby agreeing with her. Ashley was always my favorite out of the girls.
"Okay then. Let's do this!" I exclaim while bursting through the doors to the school. As we walk, I hear some whistles, snickers and just some rude and also complementing comments.
"Nice ass."
"You're sluts."
"Hot."
"Whore."
"Wow, just when I thought you couldn't get any lamer." I heard the voice of Heather Hart say.
"Just when I thought you couldn't get any stupider. Heather, we are done with your shit, just shut up and get out of our way." I say as push her out of the way, I hear 'oohs'.
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A/N - please help me.
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