Till forever falls apart {on hold}

Chapter 1

TW:mentions of sexual assault. gore, really anything criminal minds.

words:1408

Y/N pov

"so, when is the new agent coming in?" Morgan questioned. Hotch sighed. "He bailed on us, we have no new agent. Strauss says she is arranging for an agent to come down from another unit." "Well then, lets get on with our paperwork" Spencer puffed.

"We have a case" Most everyone groaned, and followed JJ to the round table room. "They call him the Seattle Strangler, 4 victims in 4 months. He keeps them alive 7 days." JJ started " The handle serves as a crank" Spence analyzed the crime scene photos. " Allowing him to control the rate of suffocation" Gideon continued, "to prolong it?" I questioned, "No, to enjoy it" Gideon flipped through the file as he answered. " Does Seattle have anything?" "Physical evidence is nonexistent. There are no leads Gideon" " And another girl is missing." "Wheels up in 30" We all went to our desks, collected our things and drove to the airstrip.

On the jet

" Heather Woodland, 22. Before she left for lunch she downloaded an email with a time-delayed virus attached. The killer's virus wiped her hard drive and left this on the screen" Hotch passed out papers to all of us, it was a message reading 'For heavens sake catch me before I kill more I cannot control myself' repeating over and over again. "William Heirens" Reid murmured. "We have fewer than 36 hours to find her" " then we better get started soon, how much longer until we land?" "not to long y/l/n, not to long." "what about previous victims Hotch?" Morgan finally spoke up. "His first victim was Melissa Kirsh, 26. Stab wounds, strangulation" "Wait wait wait, back up Reid. He stabbed her...and then strangled her to finish off?" "no Morgan, Other way around. Why do you think he started using the belt with the second murder?" Gideon corrected. "well, strangulation with bare hands is not as easy as one would believe, he probably found it took to long s-" Morgan cut the genius off "so he stabbed her instead. " And realized it would be hours cleaning up the blood" Hotch continued on. " Next time, our boy's got a method- The belt" Gideon looked at Morgan and nodded, "he's learning, perfecting his scenario. Becoming a better killer"

When we landed we all headed to the Field Office together. "He is willing to travel with the body" Gideon inspected the evidence board. "Then he drives a vehicle capable of concealing one" I added on to his statement. " 1 in 7.4 drivers in Seattle own an SUV" Genius added on. "Explorer with tinted windows" "Explorers rate higher with women" Reid debunked Morgan. "How do we know its his car?" Morgan questioned back at him. "Ted Bundy drove a VW Bug" "What about a Jeep Cherokee?" "Jeeps are more masculine" I threw in at the previous comment. (yeah ima make y/n a smart ass like reid) "We all know how an unsub feels about asserting his masculinity" "When did the Bureau become involved in this case?" Hotch questioned the agent closest to him. "After the fourth body, He dumped that one out of state" "on purpouse"

"If so, Knowledge of law enforcement Does suggest a criminal record." I butted in. "or that he watches television" Morgan attempted to debunk me, I rolled my eyes and threw a pencil at him, "Owwwwwwww, Hotch she stabbed me." "Kids behave" JJ said, keeping us professional. "Kids behave" Morgan and I mimicked her, standing in the back.

"Morgan, y/l/n Go to the site of the last murder. Don't mess anything up, stay professional, not like kids" " Fine mom." We said at the same time, and rushed out not wanting to hear his response to that. "I'm driving" " No I am" " Rock paper scissors" "Fine" rock....paper....scissors....shoot. I had paper, he had rock "HAH I WIN!! I'M DRIVING!!!!" "Fine here" he gave me the keys and we went to the crime scene.

Back at the field office

"So what do we know?" Reid was spinning in a chair, Morgan was throwing a ball up and down, Gideon seemed zoned out while staring at the evidence board, Hotch was Staring at a wall, JJ was stretching, and I was laying on the ground. Our unit did not look professional at all, we were getting weird looks from the agents outside.

"y/n you asleep?" Morgan kicked my side, lightly, "No, I am thinking" I puffed "On the floor?" "Mhm, its a very comfy floor" "Get your ugly ass up y/n" "I have a nice ass Morgan" "All right enough, Hotch tell them we are ready." Gideon ordered and walked out the door. " We're Ready? I- Does anyone else agree that we are ready?" Everyone shrugged, and headed out to deliver the profile

"The unidentified subject is white and in his late 20s. He's someone you wouldn't notice at first. He's someone who would blend into any crowd. The violent nature of the crime suggests a previous criminal record, petty crimes. Maybe auto theft. We've classified him as an organized killer. Careful. Psychopathic as opposed to psychotic. He follows the news, has good hygiene. he's smart. 'Cause He's smart the only physical evidence you'll find is what he wants you to find. He's mobile, car in good condition. Our guess- Jeep Cherokee, tinted windows. The murders have all involved rapes. But rape without penetration is a form of piquerism, and tell us he's sexually inadequate. Psychiatric evaluations will show a history of paranoia stemming from a childhood trauma, death of a parent or family member. Now he feels persecuted and watched, murder gives him a sense of power. Organized killers have a fascination with law enforcement they will inject themselves into the investigation. They will even come forward as witnesses to see just how much the police really know. That makes them feel powerful, In control. Which is why I also think.....in fact, I know you have already interviewed him." Gideon gave out the whole profile.

"I have an idea" JJ said, we had been in the office a couple more hours, no leads. " What is it?" "Undercover operation, we find who our unsub is, have a female ,y/n, lure him out whit an act, we arrest him." "that's a good idea-" "Except you won't send in agent y/l/n, you will send me in. Hi I'm agent Elle Greenaway. Sex crimes unit, send me in." We all turned to look at the beautiful woman standing at the door. "Uh- I'm Agent Hotchner. Are you sure you want to be the one to lure him out?" She nodded. " I've been assigned by Agent Strauss to help you on this case, she said that I should be the one to come in contact with your unsub." "Hotch we have his address. Lets send her in" "Why not both of them?" Reid questions. "I mean we could send them both, they could act as scared women that can't defend themselves. They found the house they were watching for a friend open, they are scared to go in, yeah we should do that..."

ELLE POV

Knock,Knock,Knock

An older lady opened the door. "I'm sorry to bother you. I am are house-sitting down the street, And when I got back the door was wide open, and the lights weren't working. I feel stupid asking this, but is there someone who might be able to come take a look inside with me?" "Richard. Richard, get down here!" She called out to our unsub. I walked with him, I hated being so close to him, but I had to keep up the act. "Are you sure you locked it?" Did he think I was that stupid? "Yeah" We walked up the steps, he creaked the door open, and turned on the flashlight. Suddenly FBI agents popped out causing him to panic, I grabbed his arm and pinned him down to the futon. " Richard Slessman, FBI. You are under arrest for the murders of 4 women"

Y/N pov

Back at the office we were still collecting all the information we could. When Greenaway and Gideon came back with the news of slessmans arrest, we left in 2 cars for his house. I was in the back with morgan, while Gideon and Greenaway were in the front. Reid, Hotch and JJ in the other car.

Thats chapter 1! I hope you enjoyed it.

MY writing is so bad lmaoooooooo. help

i will write as soon as I can!!